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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

Merci pour le compliment

@the-bean Thank you for the compliment??? Am I right???

Is anyone still writing? Cause I am. @dragon-snapper, @daeus, @winter-rose, @kate-flournoy, @faithdk, @overcomer
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone
Haha Isn’t it terrible for the doctor to be sick??? 😛
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

I’m sick. Can people please be praying for my recovery? And praying that I don’t vomit either. Thank you in advance. 🙂 🙂 🙂
@perfectfifths, @kate-flournoy, @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @sarah-h, @spradlin, @overcomer, @winter-rose, @anyone & @everyone
BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 5 months ago

Okay peoples I’m STUCK!!!! I need a title for a story, but I don’t want to give too much away. So basically it’s based on Jane Austen’s novels and Charles is lord of Birchwood, a magnificent estate. His *cough* comes and well, kicks him out, so to speak.
My sister suggested the title “The Annoying Guest” which would work as a chapter title, but…[Read more]
- Hannah R. replied 8 years, 5 months ago
  
  You could just call it “Lord of Birchwood.” I don’t know. Just a suggestion. Or you could call it *Cough*, since that seems to be a theme in your story. 😉
  What is the genre?
  - Snapper replied 8 years, 5 months ago
    
    @bluejay Uh oh… even the KP doctor has a cough. D’you think it’s from all that smoke from my melting the chairs yesterday? 😛
    Lords of the Will
    Birchwood Problems
    The Lord of Birchwood
    ???
    *hands you cough medicine* Sorry, that’s all I could come up with for now.
    - BlueJay replied 8 years, 5 months ago
      
      @dragon-snapper Yes, that smoke was terrible. So please don’t do that again. Ooo cough medicine, thank you. You know, if you were nice tempered, I could take you on as a nurse. 😉
  - BlueJay replied 8 years, 5 months ago
    
    @his-instrument Hehe. The genre…hard question since I’m not great with genres, but just think Pride and Prejudice. 🙂
  - BlueJay replied 8 years, 5 months ago
    
    How about “The Will of Birchwood”?
    - BlueJay replied 8 years, 5 months ago
      
      Or does that sound too much like a name???? :S
    - Jackson Graham replied 8 years, 5 months ago
      
      @bluejay
      
      The title “The Birchwood Will” might work, if you think that “The Will of Birchwood” doesn’t work. 🙂
      
      Jackson E. Graham
      http://jacksonegraham.wixsite.com/jackson-e-graham
- BlueJay replied 8 years, 5 months ago
  
  Hmm…a second on Lord of Birchwood.
- Daeus replied 8 years, 5 months ago
  
  hmm, I’m not sure, but here are some questions that might help you choose.
  What lesson does the character learn?
  What’s one word that could sum up the story’s conflict?
  Is there anything extremely unusual about your characters or the situations they find themselves in?
  What are common words used in titles for the book’s genre? (romance, I assume.…[Read more]
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@daeus @kate-flournoy @overcomer @jess @winter-rose @anyone else Writing tonight? I’ll be copying paper edits onto my computer if anyone wants to join.
BlueJay started the topic Pride and Prejudice in the forum 8 years, 5 months ago

@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin @i…[Read more]
Julia R. replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@anne-of-lothlorien: I have written a short Choose-your-own-Adventure story in second person. It was fun, but incredibly difficult! I can’t imagine doing 2nd person in any other way than a CYOA. That’s one thing I never liked about CYOA’s. Sometimes, they would say things like, “If you decide to chase after the criminal, go to page 8. If you…[Read more]
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?

But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.

But…[Read more]
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?

But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.

But…[Read more]
The Bean replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

Writin’!
@bluejay @jess @winter-rose @hope @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @overcomer
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@bluejay @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @hope @overcomer
Hello? Yes, I’d like to make an order to write? I’ll aim for a couple thousand words, maybe I’ll be here for an hour or so, who knows. I’m hoping others will join.
Alright, thank you, goodbye.
*hangs up phone and settles down to write*
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@bluejay @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @hope @overcomer
Hello? Yes, I’d like to make an order to write? Yes, I’ll aim for a couple thousand words, maybe I’ll be here for an hour or so, who knows. Yes, I’m hoping others will join.
Alright, thank you, goodbye.
*hangs up phone and settles down to write*
Jess replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

Sorry I missed you @Dragon-Snapper! Is anyone writing now? 🙂 @Bluejay, @Overcomer, @winter-rose, @perfectfifths @anyone else who’s around
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @overcomer @hope @jess @anyone-else
I’ll be writing for a while, so if anyone wants to join…
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@jess @overcomer @winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths (I thought I’d introduce you to the bestestist forum on KP) @anyone I’ve forgotten.
I’m editing right now, is there anyone who wishes to join me?
@perfectfifths So how this works is you find someone who wishes to write with you and you set a time, i.e an hour. You…[Read more]
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

@jess @overcomer @winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths (I thought I’d introduce you to the bestestist forum on KP) @anyone I’ve forgotten.
I’m editing right now, is there anyone who wishes to join me?
@perfectfifths So how this works is you find someone who wishes to write with you and you set a time, i.e an hour. You…[Read more]
NatalieMarie started the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago

Since I was recently asked to introduce myself, I think that’s what I shall do. I’m from Iowa and I started writing poetry my senior year in high school, then tacked on articles and mini-stories a couple of years ago and have been writing off and on since (when I can find the time between work, school, and life itself) The stuff I write varies…[Read more]
Daeus started the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

Hi friends,

I recently received edits from some friends of mine which caught my attention because they pointed out a few instances where some of my characters used coarse language (and asking me to remove them). It was only a few instances (maybe five or so), but I actually didn’t realize I had that many. Now, simply from a pragmatic perspective,…[Read more]
Jess replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago

I’m going to be writing until 10 EST, if anyone wants to join me. 🙂
@dragon-snapper, @overcomer, @bluejay, @anyone who’s around
Jess replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago

I have a prayer request, a family friend was diagnosed with stage four stomach cancer five years ago. He’s outlived everyone else he knew with stage 4 cancer when he was diagnosed. Things aren’t looking to good right now, and he’s trying to hold on for his family. (He’s a Christian.) He has a four year old daughter, and a one year old baby.…[Read more]
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