Mallory O'Bier

@dragon-snapper If the problem is just that your story seems too dismal, make sure there’s always an element of hope mixed in with the chaos and strive to focus on your characters’ yearnings/ambitions that drive them forward. If you’ve got that all down, I bout your story could be too dismal. Problems tend to intensify stories. It’s only stories…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper 😀

@Dragon-Snapper Is this problem arising in the current story you’re working on, or all of them as a whole? Because child, I’m almost finished reading your book, and I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about. If anything, I was going to say that you need to focus more on the emotion, not less. Is this a response from beta-reader feedback, or…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper heyyyyy! Thanks so much.

Well I hope it will be. And yes it is about me. I told an older gentleman in our church who is also a writer and he said, “It seems to me a person of your age wouldn’t have much to write about.” LOL

That is awesome! What are you writing? Cool blog, I skimmed through real quick.

Ice cream is awesome.

HC

@hannah-c HANNAAAAHH! Hi and welcome back!

Ooh, yikes, I’m so glad you’re okay. 🙂

Comical autobiography… that sounds hilarious. 😛 Is it about you?

Up to?

Up to much mischief, my dear friend…

I finished my third novel, working on the fourth now. Also started a blog, the link of which you can find down there in ze signature.

I also…[Read more]

@sam-kowal *cracks knuckles* @daeus I had to tag you too. XD

Challenge accepted. Raspberries. Go.

Frozen Raspberry

Bland,

And the gray of night,

Shivering hands.

No light.

I couldn’t fight,

Tasteless.

I couldn’t write…

Numbness.

Why?

A question…

A question for the sky.

Of this evil infection?

Why the gray,

Does…[Read more]

@rochellaine Oh, yeah. 😛

I didn’t think so, which is why I stopped at four verses. But now I want to try – it just may take longer.

Hole, thread, cut, sharpen, stone, water, well… Oh, I know, it gets too late to go to the well, so you have to sleep. With what shall I sleep with? With a blanket! There’s a hole in my blanket! XD

@supermonkey42…[Read more]

@skredder  Haha! My sibling and I used to play with the chess pieces like that! Give them voices and all that jazz X)

*when you should be studying for your Philosophy exam but would rather laugh at other Keepers’ insane awesomeness*
Yep. You guys are the greatest. XD

@ariella-newheart  AHHHHHHHH!   I love her so much!  My favorite part is her eyes.  And the dress…absolutely perfect.  🙂

@rochellaine One thing about sewing… the thread can never be too long (okay, maybe it can, but better too long than too short). But yes, it is a pun, and I didn’t realise it until you said so. XD I was just making my own version of the song “There’s a Hole in My Bucket.”

@rochellaine

A Hole in My Blanket:

There’s a hole in my blanket,
Dear Rochell, dear Rochell
There’s a hole in my blanket,
Dear Rochell, a hole

Well mend it, dear Louise
Dear Louise, dear Louise
Mend it, dear Louise
Dear Louise, mend it

With what shall I mend it,
Dear Rochel, dear Rochel,
With what shall I mend it,
Dear Rochel, with what?

With…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart

You know you’re a writer when you hear about someone else’s experiences and think: “Hey! I can make a character like that!”

All the time. Can’t keep up with it 😛

You know you’re a writer when, as you’re playing solitaire, you’re forming a story idea in your mind about four kingdoms who were scattered apart by enemies, and are forced to cooperate and work together to rebuild them

@jenwriter17  That’s okay! XD

@jenwriter17  Oh, and YES! Totally leave comments! 😀

@gabbyj  Sure!

BTW your signature is awesome 😉