Mallory O'Bier

@Daeus oohhh, I really like it. I would say yes, probably better to get your name matching the title. Also, a bit more technical piece of criticism here… my inner graphic designer is screaming at me that there should be more motion in the picture. It’s a lovely dramatic picture (love the shadows of the houses and such) but a lot more could be…[Read more]

I agree with getting your name the same color as the title. And I think the fonts should match better. Your name isn’t going to be fancy like the title, but they just seem mismatched right now. It would be cool if the pattern thing could be a symbol from the book, but I’m not sure if there are any overt symbols in your book…

And one picky…[Read more]

Any critique I have has already been mentioned. I like it. 🙂

Aha! It worked.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

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http://www.thescratchingquill.com/fairwin-option1/

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Oh, by the way, the image isn’t the full resolution it will be and the clearish lines and stuff will be removed when the design is done.

If anyone’s still out there, I’m going for another hour

And now I’m taking another break, but I’ll be back for more.

@jess @winter-rose I’m back for another hour.

@emma-flournoy @sarah-h @rolena-hatfield @sierra-r @kate-flournoy @jess Thank you all for praying! If you could just keep it up a little longer, it would be much appreciated. I think it’s so amazing that people here pray for each other even though they’ve never actually met in person. It makes you think about how big God really is, that He can…[Read more]

@i-j-anderson I personally like illustrations, if they’re done well, though too often I pick up a book with illustrations that look like they were done by a four year old. (You know, blobby noses, faces that are basically just a circle, and pathetic backgrounds)

Or the illustrator paid absolutely no attention to the author’s descriptions. Like, a…[Read more]

Alright. I’m gonna take a break now, but I’ll be back. I proofread something like four chapters.

@daeus @winter-rose @jess
I’ll attempt to be back after lunch- I’m not sure what my family is doing today…

@aella @winter-rose Ok, I’m back. I think I’ll try to go for an hour without breaking.

@daeus I’m not sure how long I’ll be here- I’ll probably take a lunch break at some point, then come back for a tinge. It depends on if mom needs to go somewhere.