@overcomer
Active 9 months, 3 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Daeus replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@emma-flournoy Eh, it was decent. I never really liked either Eugene or Headstone though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy Sure, I don’t think I have anything tomorrow.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Actually @Daeus apparently I can’t make it tonight either. :/ My apologies. Maybe tomorrow? 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic "A Couple of Birds" poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Overcomer I think it’s adorable and hilarious. It also has some flow problems. The big thing is probably that all of the verses seem to follow a different rhythm, which disconnects them and messes with the ‘oneness’ 😛 of the poem. I would say pick one rhythm and go with it.
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Snapper replied to the topic "A Couple of Birds" poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@overcomer Very nice! I’ve been hearing birds like that all week, and I love it! I’m glad you were able to show that in this poem. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic "A Couple of Birds" poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@overcomer It’s a nice poem. I did feel that the following lines were a bit bumpy, but otherwise thumbs up.
I should have liked to have learned it
But thus their displeasure incurred
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Ethryndal OHHH!!! Yes, okay! That one was just adorable. I’m sorry. 😛 Painful but it was so cute, and the way it turned out was beautiful for everyone. Poor John. 😛 Yes, definitely lots to be admired there.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy I was actually talking about the one between John Chivery, Arthur, and Amy. I kind of forgot the one between Pet and Arthur. 🙂 Probably because I didn’t like it that much either…
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Kate-Fournoy I was actually talking about the one between John Chivery, Arthur, and Amy. I kind of forgot the one between Pet and Arthur. 🙂 Probably because I didn’t like it that much either…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@Ethryndal yes! I’ve seen the BBC series of it and I started the book, but I hate electronics and it was on kindle, so I’m kinda looking for it in physical format (unabridged 😛 ) before finishing it.
That love triangle was actually not my favorite just because I didn’t care all that much for Pet Meagles, and I was mad at Arthur for falling for…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Has anyone ever attempted Charles Dickens’ Little Dorrit? That one had a great love triangle in in.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
Well that made me happy. I got a 62.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@S-G-Dewey Yay for you! That’s a great name!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@S-G-Dewey Yay for you! That’s an great name!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@S-G-Dewey nice! I love it. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@S.G.Dewey nice! I love it. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
Ooh, I like it too.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I got 69 too, @kate-flournoy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
I got 69. *grins*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers Score Results in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
hehe! That was a neat way of them to get my email address. *jots that down*
I got 84 too.
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