Mallory O'Bier

@hope Wait, you’re saying that you don’t want me to include a lot more of me rambling in the polished version? Hmmm… Interesting. 😉 Haha, and yes, backstories are great. Random facts are good too, especially as a means of expressing unique characterization.

@ethryndal Good point. The ghosts of our past along with the pain we experience at the present is absolutely important in shaping who someone is.

@hope Nice work. Like I mentioned with Audrey, you will also want to think about the physical consequences of these experiments along with the mental consequences to really display poetic justice powerfully. so you may want to work on that. Other than that, these look great!

@hope Sounds great!

@ethryndal Looks like a good basic setup there. Tying back to the theme, would you say your protagonist’s initial Experiment in Living really has to do with the fact that they superior races have more intrinsic worth to them?

Yes; absolutely! Developing Experiments in Living for other characters is crucial to broadening your story’s theme. We will…[Read more]

@daeus I got 315 words. Thanks for writing!

@dragon-snapper Ok, I’m gonna stop now. Got 690 this time.

@draggon-snapper Ok, I’m gonna stop now. Got 690 this time.

Aaaand I found another one.

Evanescent: Soon passing out of sight, memory, or existence; quickly fading or disappearing.

@Jess Traitorous wi-fi, to rob us of our skin-changer. Hope you have a good vacation!

@kate-flournoy Nice.
@dragon-snapper Yeah, I’ll probably be here for another half an hour.

@kate-flournoy Great! I wrote 1156 words.
@daeus Are you still going?

@Dragon-Snapper @Daeus I’m stopping for now… got 1,158 words.

@daeus Huzzah! BTW, you’re just about to banish me.

@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper Ok, here I am at last. Let’s do this writing thing.

@kate-flournoy That’s fine, I was just wondering. 😛 I am still going as well.

@Dragon-Snapper oh, sorry. I’m still going. 😀

@daeus @kate-flournoy Are you two still going, or am I alone?

@kate-flournoy Okay, I’m back now.
*sits at desk* Now, lets see if we can’t finish this writing dare. 😀