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Active 9 months, 2 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Whoa @Ethryndal that could get crazy. *grins* Thank you.
Of the thirteen blank, sterile white doors in the blank, sterile grey wall, one was painted a soft shade of creamy yellow. Pasted in ugly xs all across it were strips of yellow tape marked DANGER. DO NOT ENTER.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Thank you both! @emma-flournoy when a house is marked ‘condemned’ it means it will be torn down. I have never read The Giving Tree, or I might have and just not remember it. @kate-flournoy I would love to make all my little baby short stories into books, but alas! I cannot draw well enough. A little, but not enough to do the characters justice.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Thank you both! @emma-flournoy when a house is marked ‘condemned’ it means it will be torn down. I have never read The Giving Tree, or I might have and just not remember it. @kate-flournoy I would love to make all my little baby short stories into bboks, but alas! I cannot draw well enough. A little, but not enough to do the characters justice.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
This should totally be a children’s book. With the right illustrations it would be perfect. I love it. As Emma pointed out, a few errors as far as punctuation and spelling, but otherwise it’s lovely. Good work, @R-J-Wordsmith.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
This should totally be a children’s book. With the right illustrations it would be perfect. I love it. As Emma pointed out, a few errors as far as punctuation and spelling, but otherwise it’s lovely. Good work, @R-J-Wordsmith.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Welcome to the forum, @Rachelle! Glad to hear you were able to find us through Brett and Jaquelle. What areas of writing are you particularly trying to grow in at the moment?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle yes, I love poetry. 😉 I wouldn’t consider myself A POET but I love poetry. One of my very favorites of Tolkien’s… actually I can’t pick a favorite. I love them all. XD
As for favorite movies, um… probably LotR, Rigoletto, Henry V, Little Dorrit, Monsters Inc., Pride & Prejudice, Captain America: The First Avenger, and a lot of…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@rachelle Comics? Cool. Do you have any you could show us?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Welcome @Rachelle. 🙂 This is indeed an amazing place. This community has helped me so much I wouldn’t even know where to start listing it all. So glad to have you here!
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R. J. Wordsmith started the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Okay, apparently I deleted the post or something the first time, so here we go again. This is a short story I wrote a few months ago. Any suggestions, opinions, or criticism is very welcome and much desired. Say what you think. It isn’t very long, so I’m just going to put it right here.
The Mailbox
R. J. WordsmithI am an old, worn out mai…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Hi @rachelle! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet.
Say, what do you write mainly? I’m sure you’ll find this place helpful. I’ve grown a lot through it. (I’m sure everyone else will agree with me.)
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R. J. Wordsmith started the topic in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
So this is a short story I wrote a few months ago. Any suggestions, opinions, or criticism is very welcome and much desired. Say what you think. It isn’t very long, so I’m just going to put it right here.
The Mailbox
R. J. WordsmithI am an old, worn out mailbox. My life has been both good and long. It all started many years ago, hen the house…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Fears of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper more recently being afraid that I’ve taken on more than I can handle and will ruin something good with my inexperience. But the comfort is, I can only get better from here, and the harder I try, the more I learn. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
It looked like an ordinary door. It felt like an ordinary door. But it led into a room that was completely upside down.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic The Fears of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
By a miracle writing something that is actually amazing, but it always gets shoved to the back shelf so no one ever has a chance to see it.
What I find my courage in is knowing that if my work can impact just one life for Christ, I’ll have succeeded.
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@the-bean @winter-rose @emma-flournoy Hello! I have not read Till We Have Faces, but a lot of people have mentioned it, so I probably will be sometime.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy *flat stare*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
These are so awesome guys!
@R-J-Wordsmith
@The-Bean
@Winter-Rose
@Emma-Flournoy… and sis. Seriously. You need to write a book. -
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R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
The door in in itself, was not unusual. However, the fact that it was standing by itself in the middle of a field was.
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