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Daeus started the topic Punctuation Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Hi everyone,
I got a punctuation question for any punctuation geniuses. How do you punctuate dialogue that’s in the middle of a sentence without any direct attribution? I’ve always done not punctuation, but I’m not sure if that’s right. Here’s an example.
Mrs. Fletcher gave a touching “Well now…” when she saw him that sounded almost like a purr.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@winter-rose Yep, still here.
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Snapper replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea
Again, the theme is pride. (I’m just going to use that one as the practice one, because posting all seven of them might take a long time… 😛 😀 )
Experiments in Living:
1. Pride’s okay, as long as it doesn’t spread or grow to arrogance
2. My pride is my identity
3. My pride is uncontrollable, so I won’t control it
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Snapper replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Right, I think I have it this time.
Theme: Pride
FQ: What does pride do for or against a man?
1. Pride is simply a way to gain confidence
2. Pride won’t do anything as long as it doesn’t deprecate others
3. Pride will always destroy a man and those around him
4. Pride will grow to arrogance if left unchecked
5. Pride must be kept at bay…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl Have fun!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl Yay!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @overcomer @the-bean @hope @all the random peoples that I can or can’t think of. 😀
And now, I write/plan/do this theme homework. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic How naming affects characterization in the forum Characters 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl That’s a neat idea! I think I’ll make a list too! I happen to use ‘A’s A LOT as well, though in my more recent story it’s E. Hmm… Maybe for sci-fi the letter will be E and for fantasy the letter will be A…interesting.
Carlos, you monster! … Myeah, I think that Zlorom works better for that line. 😛
@ethryndal Eeyore. That sounds…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus *chokes on snack* Aaaaaand this is why I don’t normally pick favorites. XD
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
“Fire is set to devastate the world and you are offering me chocolate?”
“It tastes good, my dear. Relax, would you? It’s only the earth.” -
R. J. Wordsmith replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
“Never take candy from Faeries,” my mother used to say. If only I had listened.
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Daeus replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Homework for Video 10: Theme & Scene Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy You have no respect for small dragons.
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Snapper replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Ah, okay. I think I’m getting now. Thank you!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
@ethryndal That’s awesome. Like I said to Audrey, it’s awesome to have role models you see and interact with on a regular basis–especially when they have to overcome struggles like chronic health problems. Great example!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper Certainly! Here are three different answers I came up with.
– Pride is simply a way of recognizing your strengths and helps you build a confident persona.
– Internal pride doesn’t affect someone as long as they make sure they don’t act pridefully toward others.
– Pride is always destructive and will ruin all your relationships in life. -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Discussion for Video Eight: Flat Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
The person I look up to most would definitely be my mom. She has a chronic health condition that keeps her in constant pain most of the time, but her faith in God is still incredibly strong, despite it, and she’s an amazing, steady person.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic ARCHIVED – Discussion for Video Six: Positive Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
@jenali Haha, that’s great you’ve already been applying this to characters. Putting characters in a position where they can see the harms their actions are causing is a great way to induce change.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@jenali Yes; that is the unfortunate truth about what happens when you learn new concepts in the middle of the writing process!
The character arc outline here looks good. I like the fact that you included an example of someone he can look up to in the midpoint arc. Using other characters as examples is a great method of bringing about change, and…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Five: Character Arcs in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 7 months ago
@jenali Great thoughts. I love your example of you and your siblings, because it’s definitely true! The people we spend a lot of time with have the ability to influence us a lot.
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Snapper replied to the topic Rachelle's Digital Art in the forum Art 9 years, 7 months ago
@graciegirl I organize things so that I can find them, but if it tells you anything, I reorganize so much, that I can never find anything. 😛
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