Mallory O'Bier

Oh, hey everybody. I’m beta reading now.

Have to sign off now, it’s dinner time. I got a good bit done though, it was great writing with you guys!

Sorry I took so long in replying, internet is on the fritz. I’m currently working on chapter ten of my latest book.

Absolutely. What are you working on?

@graciegirl hello!

@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀

@Rachelle WOW. Her dress. How did you make it look like textured fabric??? Textures are the one thing I always struggled with. Good job. That’s… wow. Good job. 😀

Thanks for the questions @audrey-caylin and @hope! I’ll be sure to address them at today’s meeting.

Also, everyone should have gotten the link in your email, but just in case anyone missed it, the Q&A will be going live at kingdompen.org/theme-mastery-qa

@perfectfifths Well, I didn’t know either, so yeah…thanks google. 😛

@dragon-snapper Yeah, I kinda figured I was wrong 😛 Thanks for the clarification – this will be handy for all of us to know! 😀

Ah. Well then. There you have it.

@perfectfifths @daeus @ingridrd This is what grammarbook.com says. Exact quote:

Rule 2b. Do not capitalize quoted material that continues a sentence.
Example: Lamarr said that the case was “far from over” and that “we will win.”

@perfect-fifths @daeus @ingridr This is what grammarbook.com says. Exact quote:

Rule 2b. Do not capitalize quoted material that continues a sentence.
Example: Lamarr said that the case was “far from over” and that “we will win.”

@daeus
I believe you have it written correctly. This has always been a point of confusion for me too, but I’m fairly certain that the dialogue should be capitalized and surrounded with quotations. 🙂

@daeus @dragon-snapper, yes, having no punctuation there looks right, but, not to question you or anything, Snapper, I think that the “Well” would be capitalised seeing as it’s the beginning of a sentence of dialogue for the character. I could be wrong, but there’s my two cents 😉 😛

@Michael-Stanton With fantasy, who needs the internets?

@daeus I looked up in this super awesome grammar book I have… you are correct. YAYAYAY! I don’t think that the Well is capitalized, however.

@winter-rose Well, I’m going to go now. I was able to unfold a lot of layers of plot, so I am very happy. Good luck on your post!

*is suddenly smitten with doubt in everything she’s ever learned as she realizes she doesn’t know*