Mallory O'Bier

@aratrea Yep. The one piece of truth they have is the piece the MC is missing. It so much fun when the villain or main antagonist knows and (in some sort of manner) teaches the MC the truth they need to hear even while mortal enemies.

@winter-rose any time. 🙂 I’m very happy to try help out if I can.

@Winter-rose oh nice. 🙂
Some from my names list: Evans, Hier, Morgan, Enwood, Brys.

@jenali Good for finding an outside-of-the-box example. 😉 Haven’t read the book, but the brief description there sounds like it matches the method!

@jane-maree That looks good and makes a lot of sense to me. 🙂 What parts of your story’s structure are you still wrestling with?

@jenali That looks pretty good. My one concern would be that Brigen should be more seriously considering trusting in the Creator at the midpoint, not at the climax. If he only considers and tries to live this out at…[Read more]

@winter-rose Bringer, Chase, Taliman, Harrison, Grayson

@hope Yes–you can certainly have characters who are antagonists at some points and allies at other points.

Good set of characters. Bryce sounds more like a foil to me. He would be a testing ground if part of Ethaniel’s journey required Ethaniel to move Bryce to his side after Bryce learns about his true heritage. Otherwise, he’s probably going…[Read more]

@Dragon-snapper okay thanks for writing!!

@winter-rose hmmm what’s the genre?

@hope What @daeus said. It also seems like part of the reason Zevlin dies might be the ongoing poetic justice of his initial negative Experiment in Living? If so, that doesn’t violate those principles since repentance after-the-fact doesn’t always resolve us from the consequences of sin. I would point to the peace Zevlin feels in his sacrifice as…[Read more]

@hope Oh; I like that concept. So basically someone who has a mostly negative EiL, but still have some grasp of the right truth?

@winter-rose you’re very welcome. 🙂 I have super powers on offer whenever needed. 😛

@winter-rose ah nice! *gives you super powers so you don’t get distracted* Have fun with that. 😀
I’m kind of switching between plotting my novel-to-be and writing the first chapter.

@Dragon-snapper granted. 😛 But what we really need is some taters.

@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam. For Sam too! *resumes charge*

@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam.

@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speech*…for Frodo. *charges*

@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speach*…for Frodo. *charges*

@jane-maree @winter-rose For the Shire!

@kina-lamb WIP is a Work in Progress, unless you already asked @daeus. 😉
Ah, King George and the Ducky, I love it when Melvin shows up. The song of ‘There Once was a Man’ was great, the tale short and sweet, as well as amusing. Favorite silly song…ouch. Er, I like Bubble Rap, as well as Pizza Angel, His Cheeseburger and all of them besides…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper and @winter-rose I too shall be writing for a while from now.