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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Boredom, oh ye sluggish pile of leaves, the puddle of mud, ye shall not have victory over me for long!
In other words, I’ll join you. 😛 -
Snapper replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 sure! Fire away. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
All right. @That_Writer_Girl_99 one point I need to make here before we approach what a midpoint is. These plot points are in order, yes, but they do not come in quick succession. There is progression between all of them. Progression and growth as the struggles and conflicts bounce off each other in the form of the different characters.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Oh yes. It’s the question you asked yourself about intelligence vs. ignorance to narrow down the field— in essence, is intelligence better than ignorance? And if so, why?
We had several answers, only one of them correct. Giving all the characters different and conflicting EiLs on this subject and showing how they all turn out is how you make the…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Another thing is to always study. Everywhere you go, everyone you see. Just study it. What shape is that person’s eyes? How far away from the nose is the mouth? Most sidewalks are cracked. A lot of trees have oddly shaped branches. How tall compared to a human is a park bench? People’s elbows are places right where their waist…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Emma-Flournoy Aw, thanks. I’ve finally learned to go talk to my mom when I’m feeling depressed, because just having her know what I’m going through takes some of the weight off of my shoulders.
I think we’re kindred spirits. Telepathic. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m going to try Coalheart, but how do I put it on here?
I shall tag @kate-flournoy for you. *tags Kate*
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99
How to start drawing? Well, in answer to your question, the best way to start drawing it to draw. Yes, very simple, but it’s true. You learn by doing it, just like writing. However, I’ll give a bit more pointers than just that. 😛
First, I find it imperative to find the basic shapes from which I’m drawing. Always lightly…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@aysia-serene Oh boy! Cookies! *munches on them happily*
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99
How to start drawing? Well, in answer to your question, the best way to start drawing it to draw. Yes, very simple, but it’s true. You learn by doing it, just like writing. However, I’ll give a bit more pointers than just that. 😛
First, I find it imperative to find the basic shapes from which I’m drawing. Always lightly…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_Girl_99
How to start drawing? Well, in answer to your question, the best way to start drawing it to draw. Yes, very simple, but it’s true. You learn by doing it, just like writing. However, I’ll give a bit more pointers than just that. 😛
First, I find it imperitive to find the basic shapes from which I’m drawing. Always lightly…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’ll be writing for maybe twenty minutes, possibly more. Either way, I’m here.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper I second everything @Kate-Flournoy and @That_writer_girl_99 said. When things don’t seem to be working (this goes for everything, not just POV), it sometimes helps to experiment and come at it from a different angle.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey, I just want to pop in here and say, it’s so encouraging seeing you all be open about your struggles. Depression (from writing AND life) is something I’ve struggled with myself, but I’ve always felt like I needed to keep it hidden and be happy all the time, or people might think less of me. It’s nice to know I’m not alone there, and that…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
All right Elizabeth.
After the Inciting Incident we have our First Plot Point. What happens here is basically that Kara commits to follow through with what the Inciting Incident set in motion, instead of lapsing back into her former apathy.
She decides that change is in order and sets out to figure out what exactly she needs to do.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@audrey-caylin @that_writer_girl_99 @gracie-girl @dragon-snapper I’m going to be writing till two.
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Michael Stanton are now friends 9 years, 5 months ago -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Audrey-Caylin Awk really?? That is actually really cool. XD
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Audrey-Caylin Super! That’s great! 😀 *applauds*
(ooh also, say hi to Hann Remraf on your cabin, for me? I haven’t managed to catch her around for a while.) - Load More
