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Snapper replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
Dragon Snapper takes the pot of tea and heats it up within seconds. Miraculously, the pot doesn’t melt. After handing out glasses, she bounces the ball high into the sky.
“I think it must be dragon proof because it was made within in the heart of a dying star, and only those who are worthy can…oh wait. That’s Thor.” She shrugs, “I don’t know.…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose *pops head in* I’ll be editing a few essays.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose Well, I’m just wrapping up, but I’ll be on here for another ten minutes or so.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay. So…I guess…I need to come up with how I want Kara’s character to progress, and then outline it from there?
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. Sounds like a plan. I’m here if you have any questions. I’ll try my best to answer. 😉 And sure, go ahead and post it, or do a link to a google doc or something. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess Sorry. I couldn’t resist.
I’m done for tonight, having written 1257 words and eaten banana bread. -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess Don’t worry, she’ll be back in a flash. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. Not being duplicitous in the least. That was totally a compliment and should totally be taken at face value. You’re doing great. Your thoughts probably feel jumbled in your head because expressing them on paper (and to someone else) is so much more organized it helps you think straighter. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not being duplicitous in the least. That was totally a compliment and should totally be taken at face value. You’re doing great. Your thoughts probably feel jumbled in your head because expressing them on paper (and to someone else) is so much more organized it helps you think straighter. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea @daeus *steps up to the podium* Here is my testimonial.
When I first joined Kingdom Pen, I had no idea what to expect. Although I had been writing for several years, I had only begun to scratch the surface of writing. From the Kingdom Pen writing courses to the rich vaults of articles, the scratching has grown into a dig. The Kingdom Pen…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS @ETHRYNDAL, YOU DON’T JUST PRAISE PEOPLE TO THEIR FACES! XD
*can’t stop grinning* You have so totally got this, Elizabeth. It would be completely fine for her to come to grips with Blake’s truth and then spend the rest of the story deciding what she’s going to do about it. But I would be wary of that happening right away. That’s…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Can I just pop in here for one teensy moment to say—isn’t Kate awesome? Kate is awesome. I’m done now. *disappears in a cloud of glitter*
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Screenplays, poetry, and explosions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus Yay, maybe I’ll actually be able to make it to this one! I’ve had to miss them all so far due to…life… 🙂
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s great! Thanks!
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Snapper replied to the topic Anyone Want to Play Forum Volleyball? in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
The rolls to the ground, now splotched with @christi-eaton‘s tea, and Snapper is hesitant to pick it up. She flicks at it with her tail, and, deciding that it won’t eat her, pokes at it with her talons. The ball deflates.
“Oops. Sorry guys…Um…here.” She tries to re inflate the volleyball by breathing in to it, but the volleyball melts beneath…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 here I am! Thanks for your patience. 😉
Very good thing to start talking about, yes. Blake’s should probably be flat; correct. As for Kara, I’m thinking it’s going to be a bit of a mix between a disillusionment arc and a positive change arc.
What’s a disillusionment arc? Well… it’s a positive change arc. But instead of…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Cool. Would you be willing to write up 2-3 sentences about the forum in particular and how it has helped you?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Screenplays, poetry, and explosions in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus I’m hopefully going to be there! *checks calendar and works out what time that means* Yep. I think I can make it hopefully.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s fantastic. How much of your growth would you say is from the articles we publish and how much from the forum interactions?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Testimonial needed in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 That’s fantastic! How much of your growth would you say is from the articles we publish and how much from the forum interactions?
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