Mallory O'Bier

@jess I’m back!

I just finished. I edited a chapter and wrote a short script for a video I’m hoping to shoot soon.

I’m going to go make dinner now. I edited two chapters, and got an idea for a way to fix the analogy. Thanks everyone!

@winter-rose Augh! I know. Writing it was so much more fun that sitting and using red pens.

@audrey-caylin @that_writer_girl_99 Actually, it’s already finished. You could say I’m editing the first draft. It stands at about 83,000 words, though I have major tweaking to do, because like you, Audrey, I have to incorporate some Christian themes into this thing, making it partway analogy. That has to be hardest part of this book. 😛

*raises hand* First draft!

@that_writer_girl_99 *looks at you suspiciously* Do you not like fried chicken?

@that_writer_girl_99 Dragons like to eat fried chicken. Dragons like to eat ice cream. Dragons love to have fried chicken and ice cream in the same day.

@winter-rose Yep. Still taking as much criticism as I can get. 😛

@daeus Hello!
@winter-rose I am editing my novel, and might move on to edit my contest story, then I shall brainstorm.

@winter-rose @dragon-snapper I’ll join you.

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose 😀 Surprise!

@winter-rose I think we posted at the same time… 😛

I am editing for a while if anyone is out there. @daeus @audrey-caylin @winter-rose @ethryndal @jess @kate-flournoy @jane-maree @graciegirl @jenali

@alia Ooh. Ok. Certainly.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 that is a GREAT midpoint. So right now what you’re looking for seems to be a first plot point— where Kara commits to action. What about Blake? Was he taken in the fight with the Catastrophes? Or did he use it as a distraction to infiltrate the prison and get caught or something? If that’s the case Matthias could have gotten…[Read more]

@His-instrument YES THE TRAILER. OH HELP. HOW CAN I WAIT UNTIL DECEMBER? Also, I think there’s a topic about Rogue One somewhere. *digs it up* Oh yes, here it is. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/rogue-one/ I’m pretty sure it’s mostly @Emma-Flournoy and I ranting though… XD

@his-instrument I’ve seen the trailer. It looks pretty epic 😀 By the way, Louise Fowler is me, so if you tag perfectfifths, you tag Louise Fowler 🙂
And as an aside, I haven’t seen Rogue One, so if you’re all going to talk about it, please don’t tag me 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 perhaps you should try mapping out Kara’s arc in detail and going from there?