Mallory O'Bier

@daeus Haha! Too funny! Okay, how much did you get done.
I’m actually quite happy with I got done. 1887 words.

@dragon-snapper Oh! I just stopped recently. You haven’t been alone for too long. *grimace*

@daeus You’re still going, right? I am, just making sure that I’m not alone. 😀

I know very little about screenwriting. @michael-stanton would be the person to ask about that if he has the time to respond.

I’ve found it sometimes helps to get some distance. A while back I was having a rough time with my current WIP, so I set it aside for a month and tried to forget about it. Once I came back to it, the fresh perspective…[Read more]

@aratrea Oh, just an outline.

@Kate-Flournoy Ah; yes. That awkward moment when you forget your own website’s mission statement. xD Thanks for the feedback! I’ll see if I can make those page options any bigger.

@daeus That’s helpful. Were you picturing just a box outline around the smaller text, or for it to actually a box insert that would block out the cathedral picture…[Read more]

@daeus Okay, Yoda. Here now, I am.

@dragon-snapper Back I am now.

@aratrea Nuts. You didn’t call us KaPeeFers. 🙁
Anyways, looks pretty to me. I like your bio. 😛

@Aratrea It looks good. My one thought is that the home page is a little crowded. It’s hard to know what to focus on. If the text below “the chronicles of morshan” were smaller and preferable clumped together in a decorative box thingy, I think it would look cleaner.

@daeus I was only able to get 595 down, half my usual amount. I’m kinda at war with myself and this novel, though, so I guess something is something.
Tag me when you’re back.

@dragon-snapper Got half a chapter edited and I’m signing off for now, but I’ll be back sooner or later to finish the other half.

@Aratrea I really like it!

First thing I noticed— in your bio you said, when you were describing KP, ‘through proficiency and purpose.’ I thought it was ‘with proficiency and purpose.’

If it’s possible, it might also be better to have your page options in a little bit bigger font. It took me a second and a few confused glances to find them.…[Read more]

@daeus You picked the thing that I really don’t want to do, but the thing that a really, really need to do… Ummm… Thanks. 😀

@dragon-snapper Just saw this. If you’re still deciding, go write in your novel.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉

@daeus Awww.
*sigh*
Okay. I guess I’ll…mmmm….which should I do, you tell me cause I can’t decide.
1. Write in my novel
2. Write something else
3. Edit finished book
4. Story planning

@dragon-snapper Stop procrastinating! I’m back!

For an hour.

@daeus Okay. I’ll spend that time doing some procrastinating. Tag me when you’re back. 😀