Mallory O'Bier

@daeus @kate-flournoy @jess @ethryndal (Where have you been, lady Galadriel?) @daughteroftheking @winter-rose @anyoneelse I’m on.

@mark-kamibaya @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @kate-flournoy @mariposa @brandon-miller @aratrea
Thanks for the encouragement guys. I am feeling alot better about it now. And I will definitely try most, if not all of your suggestions. Thank you so much!
@bethanysinkyroses *commiserates with you* Yeah. It’s tough. 😀 We got this, though!

@dragon-snapper Hey, I actually read what other people said before jumping into the discussion!! And I guess the ice cream is my reward for that, huh? Thanks!

Yeah. I can’t do the funny things KeePers do. 🙁 Anyways . . .

I second what everyone else said which basically boils down to (1) take a break from your story (2) force yourself to write…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Hey, I actually read what other people said before jumping into the discussion!! And I guess the ice cream is my reward for that, huh? Thanks!

Yeah. I can’t do the funny things KeePers do. 🙁 Anyways . . .

I second what everyone else said which basically boils down to (1) take a break from your story (2) force yourself to write…[Read more]

@Aratrea I’ll definitely tell her that. 😛 (her website is alicemaywebdesign.com.au if you wanted to check it out) I’m glad we could help out! 😀
The text does look better and easier to read now, yes.

You did a great job. 🙂

@jane-maree

Wow. OK, you and your sister are seriously the best. Because I wouldn’t have known about half of that stuff if you hadn’t commented. xD If she ever wants to help KP web design, just have her shoot us an email, haha.

-The text is actually black to the best of my knowledge, but it’s a thin font and an overly-gray background. I made the…[Read more]

(although on further research you might actually have WP 4.8 so you might be able to ignore that point. XD)

Oh. Duh. And pray too.

@dragon-snapper Well, what everybody else has already said is fantastic, so I’ll just point out one other angle you could look at it.

Maybe your trouble here isn’t so much that you don’t enjoy writing this story as that you don’t enjoy writing this story. If that makes no sense, it doesn’t matter. The point is, here’s the solution:

Enjoy…[Read more]

(for some reason this thing isn’t posting properly. >.< Sorry about all that. :/)

@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of…[Read more]

@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)

– if…[Read more]

@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)

– if…[Read more]

@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)

– if…[Read more]

@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)

– if…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper what they all said.

I will just add that it’s definitely not an uncommon problem to have. There were times in the past two years as I waded through two drafts of my WIP that I just felt like going and drowning any capability of conscious thought in a deluge of mindless articles— anything to save myself from having to open my…[Read more]

@daeus That’s what I had been thinking would look better, but I wanted to verify that. I’ll brush up on my CSS and see if there’s an easy way to make that work.

@daeus 😛 Yay! I’m trying to write my muse back to life. 😀

@dragon-snapper Hey, good! That’s about as much as I would normally get written in a full day.

I edited around 1,400 words.

@that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @jess You guys there?