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Active 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Snapper replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@graceofspades2017 Woah! This is really neat! I’ll probably be able to do this, but I have to ask, is what I fill out fictional? So basically, I just fill it out as I want, not as reality?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Graceofspades2017 whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛
Let me tag some others for you though.
@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @JosiahDeBoer
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@Graceofspades whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛
Let me tag some others for you though.
@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @JosiahDeBoer
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@GBCarter whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛
Let me tag some others for you though.
@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @JosiahDeBoer
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Not sure where to put this, but… in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years ago
@G-B-Carter whoa! 😛 This looks like something I would normally love to do, but unfortunately I don’t have the time or mental energy right now. 😛
Let me tag some others for you though.
@Dragon-Snapper @Shannon @His-Instrument @Leumeister @Josiah-DeBoer
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 9 years ago
@daeus looks like we have a rogue topic over in novel ideas. It had some weird formatting so it probably got spammed.
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Kina Lamb and
G. B. Carter are now friends 9 years ago -
Snapper replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@his-instrument Despite everything said on this topic, another thing to do would be to ask people who are really good authorities on the subject. Parents, pastors, youth leaders, they’d probably love a question like that, and they could probably give you a more solid answer.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@catwing I’m signing out now. I wrote 559.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@catwing And you beat me to it by a few seconds. Good job! XD
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@daeus @epicaddie2 @jane-maree @catwing @shannon @emily @bethanysinkyroses @daughteroftheking
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@emily @shannon @bethanysinkyroses @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking @graciegirl If anyone’s not doing school work, I’m planning to write till 2:30.
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Snapper replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@daeus Sometimes, I’m really not sure what to do with you…
@kate-flournoy If I try to imagine myself as an introvert, I don’t like it either. XD
@graciegirl Ooh, that’s a good idea. I might use that along with @seekjustice ‘s idea of another language.
Notes to self: *do not steal the use of the word Kreylar, even purposefully…[Read more] -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic Discussion for Video Seven: Negative Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@aratrea You’re right, I don’t think he does, apart from possibly being more afraid of “Uncle.”
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Seven: Negative Character Arc in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@perfectfifths I think that’s a great example here of a negative arc and how catharsis works in it! Because Wormwood doesn’t seem to get worse over the course of the story, it’s probably a combination of a flat and a negative arc for him.
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Daeus replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Hmmm…
Synonyms for master in this case could be: Mentor, advisor, guide, counsel, teacher, trainer, sage, tutor, guru, chief, elder. Maybe, if there is a lot of formality, you could come up with some other title, like calling the master’s “Father” since they’re teaching them the skills, or whatever.
Synonyms for apprentice (if you’re also…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper uhhh… hm. Is… would it be possible to simply skip the titles altogether and simply let it be implied in their relationship? Or is it too much of a systemic thing?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Dragon-snapper my immediate thought was instructor/trainer because that sort of sounds like it might fit? Hypothetically, of course. XD
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Snapper replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@emily Dragons like to be record holders. You should as Dragon Snapper. She’s always trying to win. XD
Well, it’s a sci-fi novel in a sci-fi time and setting…not really sure how to describe that. Haha! 😀
And I didn’t want to use master because some of my book is already like Star Wars, and I don’t want it to be too much like it. Master and…[Read more] - Load More

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