Mallory O'Bier

@jane-maree *takes all the pizza*
@catwing I is the fiery friend. *grins*

*sets out a plate of pizza to share*

@jane-maree @catwing I’ll join you guys!

@Catwing
I have been summoned. I come.
I’ve got one chapter left to critique so I’ll join you!

@daughteroftheking What I actually do is use ‘Cut’ to snip out the picture I want then treat it as a photo.

@Daughteroftheking it’s worth a shot. 😛

@Ethryndal sweeeeeet.

@xonos-darkgrate what @Daeus said, basically.

Otherwise I think it looks very solid. You seem to already have a lot of thematic material (foils and such) to work with, so you’re starting out with a wide perspective and plenty of stuff to juggle around. Also you seem to know what to do with that stuff, which is always a plus. XD

As for names……[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper The grammar fairies are having heart attacks.

@That_Writer_girl_99 Cool! Thanks!

Guys! Look, I made a thing. This is not my protagonist, but she’s another (very cool) personage that I’m having fun with. (*cough cough* Can you say antagonist?)

@Emma-Flournoy This is the one who’s character page you were snooping on. 😉

aislinn-mollisong *headdesks with you* Tell me about it.
You know that you’re a writer when you realize that I’ve been saying ‘your’ instead of ‘you’re this whole time and feel terrible.

@catwing Oooo….she’s saying it. Which makes it even more awesome!

The story sounds solid from what you’re telling me. *thumbs up*

I do, however, wonder about the story world. It’s not that I think it’s wrong to do what you’re doing, but I wonder if it’s right. A force that leaks through cracks int he universe sounds mystical and there doesn’t appear to be a God in your story. I certainly believe that fantasy…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong It’s actually been done before. The Eragon series was done by a homeschooled teen of 15.

*pokes head in momentarily*
Hey…the topic is getting pretty long, and it freaks out whenever I try to click on it…so someone might want to make a new one…
*disappears*

*silently creeps in and listens because she wants to be published too but is younger than most peoples as well*
*bookmarks page*

@xonos-darkgrate I’m pretty sure most publishers will technically except writers of any age, though you may have to get a cosigner if you’re under 18 or something like that. I don’t know. I certainly know that some publishers do accept younger writers. Now, if they know that you’re younger, you will probably have a harder time convincing them to…[Read more]

@shannon Yay! *fistpump* I love her too. 😀
@jessi-rae Indeed. *ponders thoughtfully* Very intriguing. 😛
@mariposa ikr? 😀 She absolutely loves color and flowers and everything pretty.
@ingridrd Thanks!
@that_writer_Girl_99 Excellent question…I’ll have to consider giving it a significance. You’ve got my gears turning now. 😀

@dragon-snapper Very nice. Love her name. 😉

And this one is for the sequel to Sector One: Insurrection.
Her name is Dyemon.
And she’s awesome.