Mallory O'Bier

@daeus Well…you said that you were going to write it as if it were his diary. I think it would be just as fine without. It’s seems as if the dates are extra. Write it in first person, but not as if he’s writing in his diary. … Also, I didn’t think that you’d go through different parts of his diary when I wrote that…and I also forgot that…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.

@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂

@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.

@daughteroftheking lol, I do that sometimes.

@xonos-darkgrate This is loads of fun, by the way. And I also use PowerPoint.

@daughteroftheking Thanks so much! 🙂

@dragon-snapper Ooooo…pretty! I like the candles and the coins. 😉

This one is for Tallore too, but it defines him a bit more. @mariposa @shannon @emily @kate-flournoy @catwing @ingridrd @daughteroftheking @jessi-rae

And don’t forget that’s he’s Dyemon’s brother.

@salome01w4g @allison-grace @xonos-darkgrate
Thanks, guys!

@catwing Man with a gun…mysterious catwing with a gun. That would be creepy. 😛

@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.

I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.

But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!

@daeus Wow! That’s really cool! And a really interesting concept of how a minor background character only exists when the hero is interacting with him.

I’m officially intrigued. You should definitely continue this. 😀

@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉

*double facepalm* And I used the wrong form of ‘your’. My apologies, grammar fairies.

Why do I always forget about my own topics? *facepalm*

So first off @daeus You’re point about the lessons to be learned does open up a lot. I planned the second book by plotting out the theme first…I guess I should do that again, just for a national scale. And indeed it works very well. And usually, I would plot it out from beginning to end, I…[Read more]

@Emma-Flournoy Actually… no, no it’s not. More like fairytale. She’s a stepsister. (Whether it gave that impression or not… I kinda forgot about creating a proper atmosphere.)

Come to think of it, she’s only that evil 60% of the time. I suppose the collage caught her at a bad moment.

@allison-grace I follow the system taught by K.M.Wieland. It’s excellent as many others on here will testify. She has written several books on the subject and she has a series of articles on her blog covering the subject as well.

In her system, there are 18 major plot points. I like to have all of these down before I start writing. On top of…[Read more]

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UPDATE: thanks to those of you who were praying for my sister. Unfortunately, she went to the doctor yesterday and they said she has mono. Please pray that the rest of us don’t get it and she would have a fast recovery! Thanks again.