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Joy started the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 10 months ago
*Sheepishly creeps into room, scrunching up shoulders* Ahem, Hi! I’m Dekreel. I’m new to the forums. I have been following Kingdom Pen for awhile, and even posted a poem once! AMA 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 10 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Lovely! XD
@daeus Nice one. You got a line of respect. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you’re decided whether you want to include someone’s backstory or not, and decide to do so not because it’s fun to write, but because it’s heart wrenching and when you say so, your sister says only this, “Sigh.”
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Daeus replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@jess What Kate said. Basically, either the loss your character experiences needs to be necessary for them to become a better person or the ending is just plain tragic, but a side character learns something valuable from it and the readers are left with a lot of hope for that side character.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@Jess lovely topic. I have a lot of thoughts on unhappy endings, but I haven’t got time to consolidate them all now, so I’ll just leave you with the biggest two.
The first is the concept of catharsis. The reader must be satisfied in some way or other. The reader must feel that something was gained; that the world is somehow better as they leave…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 10 months ago
😂😂😂 Haha! I love how you used those parenthetical lines. I’ll have to try that myself sometime.
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Joy changed their profile picture 8 years, 10 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@salome01w4g That was 20,000 words
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths
Content. No language. No sex. Violence: a general description of Aztec sacrifices. Description is not graphic, but if just the idea of human sacrifices makes you sick, then you could have problems with it. One guy has a vision in which he is lacerating himself, though there is not a lot of detail in that part.Otherwise, this book…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@salome01w4g I don’t have a maximum deadline. A week is just my preferred deadline. Within two weeks is not unreasonable to me. However, if I happen to get a lot of volunteers, I would naturally prefer those who can get it done within a week.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@allison-grace What a neat idea!
Here are two quotes I love…


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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Hmm… I might be able to do it (I find I often underestimate how quick I can do these things). I’d just like to ask about content, if there’s possibly anything some people might not be comfortable with?
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths I don’t have an exact deadline, but if anyone could do it in about a week, that would be optimal.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus 8,900 words? Do you have a deadline?
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Daeus started the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Mornin Gents and Gentesses,
I wrote a short story recently that I’d like to find some beta readers for.
It’s a slice of life story as well as inspiration fiction in the broad sense of the term and kiiindaa romance, depending on how you look at it.
Its length is 8,900 words.
Let me know if you are interested. 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing So it looks like @jess-penrose and I are swapping. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@Catwing Yes! That’s a great idea! Very unique! *nods* Glad to be of service.
But now I must depart. Good luck on thy iron gongs. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #9 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Gongs! I love gongs! Such great sounds. 😀
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