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Active 9 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper *raises right hand solemnly* I shall never offend a dragon again.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeeeah, I was worried about that. Thanks for the feedback!
@kate-flournoy Awwwwww…thanks!
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks, friend. 🙂 -
Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:

that.
@salome01w4g *lights your sword* Go forth and conquer! -
Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid started the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
FEEDBACK WANTED
Hey, guys!
I wrote this very short story a while back and just looked at it again. Could you give me some constructive criticism? Pretty please?? Thanks!The day I arrive, Mother stuffs me in the dark closet to wait. She places me inside a cardboard box, filled with the other toys. There is a necklace, a set of paints, two…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Come back! I didn’t mean it!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
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Daeus replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I want that on my wall!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

No offense to @dragon-snapper. -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Oh! Cool. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily-d The story of my life…lol
@dragon-snapper WHAAAAA…! So cool! -
Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Yeah. I knew it was in editing mode. I left it that way because sometimes people like to leave long comments at the end of a story. Suggesting mode is much better for editing in general though. You can switch it to suggesting mode whenever you like.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing Glad to be of service! All of those songs are great, btw.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus Great! And I hope you realise it’s in edit mode rather than suggest mode. I’ll try to just make comments, but suggest mode is really helpful for making edits that you can later accept or reject.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
There. I made one!
The picture came from Pexels…the quote came from me. -
Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I think I sent you an email, but if you didn’t get it, you can access it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16ycjr6zOnxjAtIpSkMQ6SDkHKlg5iX3oMfA9aHpUD7I/edit?usp=sharing
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