Mallory O'Bier

@lifeofkatie On the button?

@daeus Fair enough.

@lifeofkatie *eats all the ice cream*

@emma-flournoy I won’t tell Josiah what you said about frogs. *mourns over frogs*

@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.

@dragon-snapper

The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.

They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]

Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.

@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie

Okay! How about this?

http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/

My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…

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@daeus That is a really interesting principle. How did you come about thinking of that?

@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀

@ethryndal Awe, yay!!! It’s been great getting to know you, and what a wonderful 1-Year-Anniversary post. 😀 *doesn’t cry* (What do you MBTI peeps say about INFPs here? 😛 )

*dances around in glitter* So pretty! *sends you a kangaroo and a wallaby*

@jane-maree Yes! Shoot me an email.

@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but I have written it just a bit.

My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]

@ethryndal First off, I’ve been meaning to say this.

Secondly,

YOU’VE BEEN ON FOR A YEAR?!! A YEAR ALREADY! SWEET!

@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:

– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]

*sighs* Why am I always late?

@dragongeek First, I love your tag.  Second, you sound pretty fantastic.  Third, if you could be anything other than a human (assuming you are one of course), what would you be?

Aaaaannnd it’s a good thing that you didn’t spell “Get” like “Geat” as I just did… *facedesk*

@daeus Oooooh, me likey!  Though I would consider what @lifeofkatie said about the “Geat Your Free Training Now” button.  It’s kinda…ugly.  😜 Other than that though, brilliant job!  🙂

@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.

@daeus  I’m having the same problem as @winter-rose…😕