Mallory O'Bier

Okayyy, that was a bit long and complicated…

@jess-penrose You still there?

@supermonkey42  It can be confusing if the story isn’t written with good transisions in between 1st and 3rd person. Since the story is mainly in 1st person, I think it should be based upon what the character knows.

When you have a section that’s in 3rd person, you could have the character say, “While I was doing this or while I was at that place…[Read more]

@supermonkey42 I don’t think it would be too confusing as long as the MC doesn’t know what other characters are thinking because…that would be creepy.

@ingridrd Thankee.

@emily Yeah, I’m excited to announce it. 🙂  Wel, I’m going to sign off from here, but I’ll still be around the kingdom 😉

Thanks, @sam-kowal! Oh, and sorry about your furniture XD  Ever considered making an allowance just for furniture for times like these?

WHOA, Stan, what a fire! I think it is a record!

@emily Okay. I have officially chosen the main characters… So yeah, very productive XD

@emily Hello! Yes, I’m still here

@ethryndal Just thought I should add that How To Write A Sizzling Synopsis is a helpful book for writing a synopsis. You’ve probably heard me say that before, but what can I say.

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I have selected three main characters for the KPA!

Presenting…

@princessfoo, @sam-kowal and Stan!!

Sorry to both of you for any inconsistensies in this drawing. 🙂

All the rest of you will be supporting characters, all in an army, like Bilbo and the dwarves! I will do my best to make all your characters as big…[Read more]

@Emma-Flournoy *dies* This is great. I’ve been waiting for your very thorough say so, and child, let me tell you, it didn’t disappoint.

Considering I’m not trying to market my synopsis yet, I think I’m just going to go with the first, slightly longer one (with your suggestions applied, of course, because I like them), and deal with the length…[Read more]

Thanks @lady-iliara, @0-0enyali0-0 and @destiny!

@epicaddie2  @princessfoo  Anyway I could improve my Araluen? Landmarks? Climate? Size? Cities?

@seekjustice  @that_writer_girl_99  @winter-rose  @daughteroftheking  Anyone around? I’m making more plans for my KPA

@dragon-snapper Noice.  😉

A few concept art drawings for my WIP.

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly Right here.

@lady-iliara Mmm… 😉

@supermonkey42 Thanks. I thought it had a cool classical ring to it. 😀

@shannon Oh, definitely check them out! It’s one of my favourites, especially the third book, Samara’s Peril. It’s definitely for young adults, but it is a great story, and the characters are wonderful.

@winter-rose Ah well…when King @daeus banished me and then let me back in as a knight, I decided not to plunder gold anymore. Ice cream was enough for me. 😀

And now I must depart, but I wrote 1208. Have fun with your unicorn! 😀