Mallory O'Bier

@alia  Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!

The line “Must tell the Jolly old elf” in particular should be longer. Maybe “I must report now to the Jolly old elf.”

In general, the more similar the poem lines in a poem are in terms of syllables, the more beautiful the poem as a whole will be. So maybe you could lengthen/shorten all your lines to the same…[Read more]

Oh, and I just saw your walking robot animation. I loved the lighting and “camerawork!”

@leumeister  I am interested in animation because my Dad is a computer geek! I understand the term “vector graphics,” because of him! I don’t know who else knows what that is XD  Can you remind me what “armature” means? I can’t believe I don’t remember!

The only little animation I’ve done is stop-motion. I’ve done it with LEGOs, drawings, and e…[Read more]

@leumeister  Of those two I would pick Tristan — I like that name (if I haven’t mentioned before) 🙂

@inkling-for-christ whoops, somehow missed this! 😛 Cool.

@epicaddie2  I KNOW BOTH OF THEM BECAUSE THEY ARE FROM HAMILTON!!!!!  *tackle hugs you*  Alexander Hamilton says it during the song My Shot and the other one is from Story of Tonight.  Are you a Hamilton fan??????

@leumeister  I guess CG would be my favorite…hmm, I like the Despicable Me movies, Tangled, and Toy Story.  I’ve never written a story with having it animated in mind…neat idea though.

@leumeister  I definitely enjoy watching animation…the rest of it doesn’t interest me much.  That’s super cool that you like it!  (Nice alliteration in the title, by the way.) 🙂

@sleepwalkingmk  *wipes away happy Christmas tears*   This is adorable and heartwarming.  I literally had one suggestion.  (Btw, I am “Anonymous” on the document.)  Brilliant work!  🙂

@mariposa  It’s just perfect.  This definitely calls for a party.  Chocolate, anyone?

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@mariposa  Well, sci-fi doesn’t have anything to do with KP, soooooooooo…

@mariposa  AAAH! Don’t steal my thunder!!!!

It’s still awesome! 😉

@mariposa Oh my word I’m giggling so hard. XD This is THE BESTISTEST. xP

@mariposa This is fantastic. 😀

Tagging @the-real-kapeefer for good measure.

@Mariposa I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@mariposa These are great. 😀

I believe Gracie and Sierra are @graciegirl and @sierra-r

@Mariposa good heavens, I think I’m dying. XD XD XD

@sleepwalkingmk Nice! I’ve put in a couple of comments on the actual doc for you. 🙂

@sleepwalkingmk *grins ear to ear* This is so sweet!! Let’s see… I like how you set the scene, but I also think you should spend more time talking about what the narrator is thinking. It’s a little idle right now, talking mostly about the things going on around her. It’s still awesome though! Also, “a while” is one word: “awhile.” 🙂

Nice job!! 😉