Mallory O'Bier

@rochellaine  Wonderful, thanks! I made some comments 🙂

@clairec  Wow 🙂

I’ve done a fetal pig, a frog, an owl pellet………. and one or two other things that I can’t remember

@emily-d  You don’t like “All I Need is You?!” Why?

My two favorite songs by Hollyn are “Obvious?” and “Girl” I also really like “In Awe”

@jenwriter17

Like @audrey-caylin said, the biggest thing you can do to build your base and bring people to your blog is comment and build relationships with other bloggers. I’ve had to do that myself.

Unexpected… Actually, the main thing that I didn’t expect was how much I’ve enjoyed it. There’s not much that I haven’t liked so far. But you…[Read more]

@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.

The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.

It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 I haven’t really read modern dystopia, but I do get the impression that it has lost something it used to have. Namely, all the early dystopias were prophesies. The authors looked at the culture around them and, knowing what they did of mankind, civilization, and technology, they constructed a model of the future that they thought was…[Read more]

I’ve done a bull’s eye, a (large) earthworm, a crayfish, a perch, and a frog. This year I’ll also get to do a fetal pig!  And yes, I do like biology. 😉 @dekreel.

@rochellaine  I like it! I love how casual the narrator sounds. Except he sounds a little too bumbly to me. It’s an interesting story, but I think I would cut out some of the “bumbling” if you know what I mean. That would make it much more interesting in my opinion. But then again, I personally favor action. What can I say? *shrug*

Anyway, I…[Read more]

@clairec  Hehe, do you like biology? I think it’s cool! What have you dissected?

ahhh, okay. @dekreel. I know, right?!

@waterlily  Haha, that’s perfect! I might use that… Ohh, unless you’re already using it, which is fine XD

@clairec  She said she did it when she was eight or something, so I doubt it

*looks at fish brain picture*  Eww…..  Cooooooooooll

(I like biology XP )

@rochellaine  Oh, that’s funny!! Good signature choice! 😉

@mnvalentine  Okay! I’ll write an article!! Not sure about the book though XD

@jenwriter17 Ha. I actually have a KP Cinema video about cliches in dystopian novels coming out sometime this month. xD So a lot of my “advice” would be in there. I wouldn’t say oppressive governments are cliched because they’re required for that genre, but I would recommend studying classic dystopias like Animal Farm, Fahrenheit 451, Brave New…[Read more]

😀 @jane-maree, do you have a picture?

@clairec  LOL @jane-maree Also kissed a frog, I think

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