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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hey @daeus ,
It was a short story that disappeared when I tried to edit it … technical diffulties! *sigh* I’m trying to put it up again, but it doesn’t want to go up because it says it already exists …
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment 8 years, 11 months ago
You listen to Kpop music? Or you just like the quote? (Which is a good one, by the way.) 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
I’m calling it quits, too, @ethryndal . I’m feeling satisfied too. I added four more stanzas to a half-finished poem that had six. It needs a lot more work, but it’s getting there … slowly …
Thanks for writing with me! 🙂
By the way, you are welcome to borrow my deer anytime. I have plenty at home. 😉 (Seriously, they’re everywhere!)
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
That sounds great, @northerner ! Outlines are tough. (Not to write, really, but to be satisfied with.) 🙂
I’m still going, @ethryndal ! 🙂 I’m making some headway on my poem, so I’ll be at it a while longer …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Good for you, @daeus ! 🙂
Gaah! @ethryndal , that’s … that’s ………………….
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Thanks, @ethryndal ! 🙂 😉 :/ The name just keeps getting longer …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
A herd of deer, maybe. I have plenty if you want ’em! 😉 @northerner
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Yay, @daeus ! 😀 *sharpens fingertips to prepare for some crazy typing* 😉
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Can I join you guys? 🙂 @Northerner @daeus @ethryndal
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Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment 8 years, 11 months ago
I miss you a lot already, @bluejay . 🙁 Don’t stay away too long! I’ll pray that you and your family will be able to work things out.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Me too, @jane-maree ! There are a wealth of unique and awesome names (and very nice ordinary names too) in movie credits. (Names I didn’t even know existed!) Tons of inspiration there. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
I think I’ll quit now, @r-j-wordsmith . Thanks for writing with me. 🙂
I wrote some more of a poem I’m working on, and figured out some unresolved plot issues I need to fix with my novel outline. I have a lot of conflicting ideas for my story world and villain that are confusing my muse … anyway, it’s a step in the right direction! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
Awesome, @r-j-wordsmith ! 🙂 If this is to end in fire … we’ll just write. 😉 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
Would anyone like to write with me for 30 minutes or so? @daeus @dragon-snapper @r-j-wordsmith @winter-rose @graciegirl @hope
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Hi Mallory! Wow, I’ve been gone a while. I used to listen to Kpop, and I still like the quote. 🙂