@overcomer
Active 2 months, 4 weeks ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Sure thing, @jess ! 🙂
I did alright … I discovered that most of my poem stinks and that editing is going to be harder than even I anticipated, but … that’s writing for ya. 😉
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Let’s go! Allons-y! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
That worked out, actually, @jess . I had a few things to do myself. Are you ready to start now?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Awesome, @jess ! You ready to start in 10 minutes, and write for about 30 minutes?
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Does anybody want to write in 15 minutes? (I have a few things to do first)
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Thanks for your advice and feedback, guys! I’ll look over my poem and tweak it and get back to you. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I love the opening too! Really the whole first paragraph is pure gold, but the first sentence hooked me. I’m pretty sure I held my breath when I read it the first time and every time since. I knew then and there that it was time to get comfy and settle in for a good story. (And I was prejudiced against it because I didn’t know what on earth a…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Yay me! 😀 😀 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
Is it too late to join? because I can’t resist. I love The Hobbit too much! Please say yes!!! @bluejay
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Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment 9 years, 6 months ago
I hope we get to read some of this stuff …
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Mallory O'Bier posted a new activity comment 9 years, 6 months ago
Wow, @bluejay , that’s awesome! 😀
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I hope we get to read some of this stuff …
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@overcomer *taps side of nose* You might… *mysterious grin* 😀
And thanks. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Alternative Historical Fiction Book Premise in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
I agree with @jada-mae that you need a little more information here. What is the goal of the story? Yes, she wants to, and gets to be, and army nurse, (probably don’t want to give away the part about her getting what she wants) but why must she destroy the contents of the mysterious safe? Why her? I think there needs to be more information…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I suppose I could always try the balancing thing and just cut out the omniscient parts later if they don’t work out …
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@overcomer *taps side of nose* You might… *mysterious grin* 😀
And thanks. 🙂