Mallory O'Bier

Anyone want to write with me for 25 minutes? @dragon-snapper ? Anyone?

I might be doing some writing an hour or two from now.

I can’t find the worksheet for lesson four, @aratrea . Isn’t there supposed to be a link or something below the video? Thanks!

Thanks, @kate-flournoy . 🙂

Sticking with one rhythm is a good idea, but I probably won’t be able to rewrite it that completely. :/ Still, I’ll see what I can do. 🙂

In a way, three stanzas that each have their own rhythm is a type of rhythm if they have a connection. Maybe if I tweak them a bit it’ll fix the flow problem.

If not, then I’m…[Read more]

Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

@winter-rose , what about that last verse doesn’t work for you? Do you think it’s disjointed?

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to…[Read more]

Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

Good point, @winter-rose , I’ll keep that in mind.

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to editing poems … is editing.

I can…[Read more]

I’m hoping to gain some writing insight that will help me with my story planning. 🙂

I think theme is exciting because it takes a vague idea for a story helps me shape it into something I don’t just want to write because it’s interesting, but need to write because it matters to me. Theme helps me come up with a message for my story, and goals for my characters.

I almost forgot to sign off! I’m done, @ethryndal, @winter-rose, @dragon-snapper . I did a little story planning and research. 🙂

Alright, @dragon-snapper . I’ll be here for an uncertain amount of time too. 😉

Anyone still writing? @winter-rose @dragon-snapper

Ah, the brainstorming stage. *sighs happily* That may just be my favorite. Of course, I hardly ever venture past it, so, that’s probably good. 😉 @dragon-snapper 🙂

Alright, guys, I’m done! I finished up some more (seriously belated beyond all redemption 😉 ) feedback for @bluejay and sent it to her. How did you guys do on your projects? @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @northerner

BIG party! @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @northerner ! 😀 Awesome! 🙂

Congratulations, @dragon-snapper ! 🙂 I’m going to work for at least 30 minutes longer. You’re welcome to join me, Yankee. 😉 @northerner

Yay, @dragon-snapper ! Let us fight together! 😉

I’ll be writing for 45 minutes if anyone wants to join. 🙂 @dragon-snapper , @daeus , @winter-rose , @anyoneatall

Deciding what to write next is the hardest … it helps if you think about what interests you most right now. It’s pretty hard to write about historical characters if what interests you right now are modern cultures and peoples. You know what I mean, @dragon-snapper ?

It’s especially hard if you’re like me, and you’re constantly developing…[Read more]