Otherworldly Historian

@thearcaneaxiom

Nope this is the one before Viscount. Currently I’m calling it The Darling Theif, but I’m not set on that yet

@freedomwriter76

Yes… she’s growing… by watching her children suffer… I-I

*sobs quietly in corner*

@princesachronicle22

Ohhh! Is this for Viscount? What are you doing to her in the torture chamber that is a book page?

Okay I just barely started writing a prolouge for one of my books, and it was inspired by a dream last night but writing it right now I feel so evil, this poor woman can’t escape me XD

@freedomwriter76

Awwwww…thanks!!!! 💕💕💕💕 I felt pretty confident, but it’s always good to get second opinions. 😉

Now, to nail down Tony’s internal conflict…

XD yeah, I’m sure you’ll do great!

Alex is my creation, so she’s not hard, lol!

Yes, that does make things easier! Though sometimes I have no idea what to do with the minds of my charrie’s…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I think these look great! The first thing I would say when it comes to this stuff is think about how consistent does this fit with the narrative of the cannon series, the issue with that however, is that the cannon isn’t even consistent with itself. That being said, I think you did well on this with both characters. Steve was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter67

I think you nailed them pretty well!!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, the Castle is actually really cool. My logical brain pesters me about the contradictions, and how the lore doesn’t quite work in any cannon sense, but that’s not the point. I really struggle with characters, I can make them struggle, and that’s a big part, but that’s still a small piece of who they are as an individual. The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah that’s how I feel about the Castle! It’s been really good for my character development and writing (:

@freedomwriter76

Yep…I’ve felt like that too many times to count. 😂😂😂 I think that’s why I started writing fanfictions even more…they’re great for practicing writing and they get you writing without making you stress so much. 😊

Yeah, stress is a big thing when it comes to writing. If your doing it just because you feel like you have to, then you’…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Yes your very thorough, but that doesn’t mean we have everything figured out XD

I’m just trying to over dramatize thank you very much! It’s my writers right

@freedomwriter67

Yeah, I get that! I adore writing and doing at for it but even I get tired of it at times, I can’t wait for my book to be finished and to try and self…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Lol, okay, fair…😂😂😂…but some of it is done for me…I’m just…changing things…😜

True. I guess that’s probably the biggest advantage to fanfiction. A base templet has been provided, so now you can dedicated your energy more into the story instead.

@freedomwriter76

Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️ It seems like a lot of fun…I just don’t have the patience. 😆😆😆

Say’s the one writing 4 books worth of fanfiction😆

@princesachronicle22

What contradictions? Very incomplete yes, but I’m thorough in making sure there isn’t anything that contradicts anything else.

@freedomwriter76

Yes, we simply have to divert your attention away from the millions of plot holes and self contradictions that ruin it XD

But thanks!! I love worldbuilding C:

@freedomwriter76

Well, I’m sure you’ll find something that fits perfectly into your model!!! 😊

Yeah, it will come to me and/or Princess eventually.

Y’all’s worldbuilding is absolutely A M A Z I N G !!!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

You make me blush:)

@esther-c

See ya!

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c.

Hmmm…I was thinking (maybe…) someone can merely look at the stone and it will break??? Just a thought that came into my mind. 😂

Yeah, what’s interesting about that is that it does correlate to the particular model we’re doing. It could be rationalized, but I’m still not sure, it still feels a little too much like the…[Read more]

@esther-c

Bye!!!!

@esther-c

Yes totally!!!

@freedomwriter67

So true!