OrangeArmadillo

@mimeralizedwritings

Hi!! (Sorry about seeing this only now, the KP ghost regularly eats my notifs)

Doing okay, especially since it’s Christmas. I got some drawing books and a really beautiful art book by a guy named Omar Rayyan. Ate cookies, stole cookies. Feeling some dread about the second semester, especially because I’m years behind in mat…[Read more]

@loopylin

Okay, she might head in Felicity’s direction for support, just to feel better

@rae.

I didn’t cry, but I had a sudden urge to find Marcel, give him a hug and just be with him.

Aw XD I’m glad

Now I’m wondering if there is anyway Chase could find Marcel, because Chase has an urge to apologize. Like, an urge so deep that it’s one of the fi…

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@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Hugo

As Hugo wandered around, searching for a new partner, he caught a shard of an argument between Nahim and some girls. He twisted his body to veer around them, yelling, “If firearms were allowed, yours would be a much shorter conversation!”

@highscribeofaetherium @loopylin

It’s so good!! A lot of my style was inspired by that movie. It doesn’t actually seem that way, reading my writing XD But you know my name, Whalekeeper? Comes from a WIP partially inspired by Song of the Sea.

@trailblazer

Thanks! Yeah, I figured it was pretty obvious, lol. I wasn’t really trying to hide it.. I guess I was more concerned with telling the story than surprising the reader. And I’m sure most of us have read other stuff with basically the exact same plot, so it wasn’t exactly surprising anyway.

Got it, I’ll fix that. Thanks!

@highscribeofaetherium

Did you get that name from Song of the Sea? I always think of that movie whenever I hear the name.

@loopylin

Technically. 😉

@savannah_grace2009

Aw, that was so sad! I really liked it though, tag me if you post more.

@grcr

Oohhh, I like it!

@jonas

Yeah, the banned list is pretty goofy. @calyhuge knows what kind of items our characters carry in their pockets. Like @ loopylin has a character with a lighter, and one of my characters sometimes carries firearms. …I think fire starters were banned…?

@jonas

Yeah, it was mentioned in the dialogue, but I guess it might be easy to miss that.

*Calls out @everyone* Switching partners, now!!

Hugo

He tried to teach her a simplified set. But even though she was a good learner, the music slowed down, and any “real” swing became impossible. They both laughed, shook it off and went back to waltzing.

From how the evening had gone so far, Hugo tried to form opinions on Nar. She seemed to be…[Read more]

@rae

Thanks! I fixed the stall part in my document, but it won’t let me edit my post anymore.

@jonas

So, the king has been traveling for a while. He wasn’t aware of the rules put on the people by his regents, who he’d appointed to take care of the country while he was gone.

When I wrote it, I was trying to create sort of an allegory. I know it’s not perfect, but that’s what I was thinking when I came up with it. The king is meant to…[Read more]

@jonas @rae

I added a few sentences that hopefully resolve it a little better? I’m not sure. Do you still think it’s missing something?

… I can’t believe I didn’t see it before—who he was. The suspicion has grown inside of me for weeks, strengthening with each day that passed. When the guards disappeared from the marketplace. When the curfe…

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@rae

Alright! XD Thanks, I appreciate it.

@grcr

Got it!

@jonas

Yeah, I knew it was pretty obvious. I’m not sure how else to write it (where it’s not obvious) in such a short word count.
So, yeah. As soon as I posted it I was like, oh, I need to add something that talks about how the rules/guards have been changed. Really when I wrote it I was thinking it’d have a few more scenes, but then when I got…[Read more]

@grcr

Ugh, I know, that’s the worst. Maybe try Nameberry? I usually go there for names.