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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Sounds good! Yes, I think I get what you’re saying about Divine Election, but I don’t really know how it would change evangelism for me. Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I’m also pretty…
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Barnes
“Might as well be an exoskeletal crisis,” Barnes said. “Soul-searching is illegal in nineteen counties. You have always been you, Angelo, have a cup of tea.”
Hugo looked back and forth between Reid and Tenz. His eyes became the slightest bit shiny, expression hidden by his scarf. “I can’t go to anyone for help, Tenz. They…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Totally gotcha. Sometimes it’s just good to get all your thoughts on a scene down, even if they don’t all end up in the final draft.
Sure. Hopefully you got what I meant, since this is kind of a controversial topic in Christian writing circles. In the end, it’s really up to the author who knows what’s best for their story h…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Awww! Really sweet scene. So… could I get some more backstory here? 😅 Aaron died because he was a Christian and didn’t give into the government, but the reason everyone else is still alive is because the gov doesn’t know they’re believers? And if Noah was tortured once for his faith, how did he escape?
I know this kind of thin…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
@jonas I would love a link to the doc! And also, I don’t care. We can probably reach the city with just one more RP, so feel free to add them in whenever.
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Aww thank you ☺️ *Hugo returns the hug immediately*
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Writing this boy is all about being the sensitive person in the group, but also being self-restricting and polite. Kinda funny to write. XD
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whaley replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Art. *Eats the art* Mm, tasty.
I love it when people first start digital art and I can see the work and quick progress, I can definitely see that here!
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whaley replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I just realized there’s nothing to wait for at this point, I can reply. XD Okay.
Hugo
“We’re all from different worlds and stuck in a castle. At least, that’s what seems to be the case,” the young man Rowan said.
Hugo laughed. “So what, we can’t do anything without interdimensional travel? Like in the science fiction…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
I’m not sure either, but it’s an idea. We need more of those.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
This is true 😖 And since Dante doesn’t actually belong in the school, you could also deal with the mess of him pretending to be a student
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
It’s only been a few days. I think it would help to find some good conflict. Can’t think of what.
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Yayy rare lore dump, I figured you decided on her height for a reason.
Marcel — Edge of Deepwild
They stopped at a road junction, the city just up ahead.
“Never heard of an ink mine.” Marcel walked up to a sign ahead, which would direct them into the main street.
The girl dropped her cape and gave him…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
@jonas I think we’re between the city and forest, so either one lol. @whalekeeper @loopylin
Sara —> Edge of Elderstrand
“Well, then,” the man said. “Should we try the city? I have a feeling that’s where we’ll best find answers.”
Sara looked toward the deserted, ominous-looking city and bit her lip. “I guess so.”
As the four of them left the fo…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Marcel — Edge of Deepwild
Marcel turned to face them, and the grass hovered motionlessly in a circle around him. “I’m… Marcel? I’m almost sure of that.”
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whaley replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
Sara —> Edge of Elderstrand
“But you can just call me Ellis.” The young man patted the sword at his side. Ellis—a lavender name that carried the scent of violets.
“I’m Sara.” She looked to the other girl and the boy who hadn’t introduced themselves yet.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Lol. It was just such a sad chapter 😅
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whaley replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
We should probably keep it under 3000 for the judge’s sake.
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