The fledgling Artist

@rochellaine Why don’t you like Josiah’s stories?

@jenwriter17 I am on!

@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛

So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains.  Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 What a cool bunch of ideas!  I like what @skredder suggested.  I will try to think of something, and let you know if I have any ideas.  So, do her “grandparents” care a lot for her?  What happened to her parents?  And do you know what theme you might be using?

I think biracial people are beautiful.  I guess one way you could let r…[Read more]

I think the second option is good, but I also think that she should have met him at least a few times even if she was too young to remember properly. But what if he’s not a mad-scientist? What if he’s actually good but there are some bad people who caught onto his experiment and have been funding him? However, the experiment is ready for…[Read more]

@seekjustice @jenwriter17 I don’t think I’m going to be on tonight.  It’s been a pretty hectic day, and I’m really tired. 🙁  I guess I’ll see you tomorrow.

Happy writing/editing! 😀 *hands out leftover chocolate chip cookies from my grandmother’s birthday party this evening* *disappears beneath blankets into coma-like sleep* 😛

@alia Oh, wow.  Yes, I will be praying!

@alia Of course I’ll be praying!

@jenwriter17 *blushes* Goodness!  Thank you. 🙂

@gh24682468999 I write structured poetry.  Daeus did too, but he’s not here anymore.  (He’s one of those traitors that snuck off to join the enemy at Story Embers. 😛 )  I’m horrible at giving advice, but I would guess reading a lot of good poetry would help.  I write mostly comic poems, so I don’…[Read more]

@kaya-young I like writing lots of different styles and rhyme patterns and rhythm patterns.  I don’t know what blackout poetry is.  One of my favorite poems is called The Destruction of Sennacherib by Byron.  Thats the first one that comes to mind.  Here, I’ll post it for you.

The Destruction of Sennacherib
BY LORD BYRON (GEORGE GORD…[Read more]

@seekjustice I never understand pinterest. 😀  I look at stuff on it once in a while, but not often.

I edit, and edit, and edit, too. 😛  But I do it with everything. All those little “first chapter” bits that I write when I have an idea, but not the time to complete it?  I go through them all and edit once in a while, whenever I am looking fo…[Read more]

@seekjustice Is it strange that I don’t have a pinterest account? 😉

Haha, well, that’s the way I feel with my western.  I was wondering if maybe we’re opposites when it comes to writing and editing?  It takes me forever to write even a little, but I can edit pretty quickly, (as you might remember from the time I rewrote that passage of the w…[Read more]

@seekjustice Yup, yup!  That’s what happens.  You go on vacation, then you need a vacation from the vacation! 🙂

How is Stars coming along?  Is it nearly done? (Translation: Will I get to read it again soon?)

@seekjustice And I’m working on, guess what? My western! 😛  Of course.

Did you have fun at camp?

@seekjustice Oh, I wish I could.  😛  But I’m afraid that doesn’t really count.  Unless…are you thinking deeply over them in order to get ideas for how to improve your writing? 😉

@seekjustice I’m in bed, but I’m also starving, so if I convince myself to get up and find a midnight snack, I’ll be up for a while, and if not, I’ll fall asleep on you, but anyway, Hi!  Are you here now?

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @seekjustice @alia Anybody on?  I am researching.

@seekjustice Are you back?  You said you’d be back on Tuesday/Monday.  Missed you!

@jenwriter17 Okay, goodbye. I once lived at a house for ten years before moving, so I get where you’re coming from. 🙁

@ariel-ashira Yes, I’m going to add that.  I have just written the intro paragraph so far.  I was asking for suggestions as to what else I should put in, but I had thought of that already.  Don’t worry. 🙂  (I don’t think I’l…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira I did a lot of mine on Befunky.com, which is a free website where you can edit photos and make collages and stuff like that.  That’s where I made my collages for my western and my story prompts from the Writing Prompt topic.  It’s really cool.