NatalieMarie

@inkling-for-christ Haha! 😀 I don’t think I’ve ever seen a “show don’t tell” review before. Good job.

@mariposa *chokes on her left-over Christmas gingerbread and faints into the eggnog*

Oh wow… I… I don’t even know what to say…

@Winter-Rose I love how you tied it together at the beginning and end; nice work. 😀

Overall, I think it’s pretty strong. I do think you could cut this one line: Before he can drop the mission killers close in, confronting him with a choice. Will he run from the men who want Amy dead, or will he remain and risk repeating a past defeat he wishes…[Read more]

@winter-rose

So, what is this? Is this like a large writing accountability club?

@winter-rose *props chin on fist and looks up at you with enormous, adoring brown eyes* When I grow up, I wanna write like you.

That. Was. Awesome.

@catwing

The face lines are great! I wasn’t sure what I was looking for with these characters, but I think you nailed a good pattern that I can build off of! It’s great! So great! Thank you again! XD

I honestly can’t amply express how good she looks through text, or how excited I am for seeing her for basically the first time out of my head…[Read more]

@catwing

Hey wow!!! That’s really really good! 😀 I like the circuitry marks on the neck (I didn’t think of cladding the neck, just keeping the mechanical parts exposed, but that’s a good idea!)

That’s brilliant! 😀 It’s amazing! I…. Wow… Thank you! That looks so good! 😀

I like how you made her put a wig on in the mirror. It gives an…[Read more]

@catwing Maybe… I dunno, that one’s hard. A cabin maybe.

@emma-flournoy

Hopefully! 😀

@catwing

Oh cool. What kind of stop motion was it?

You’re right. It does depend on the movie. I’ve sometimes wondered why some animated movies don’t go for a more photorealistic style, given that we have the capabilities of that, but the answer is probably quite close how it depends on the movie… That, and budget…[Read more]

@dekreel

Yes I am. 🙂

@Introvert_girl good question. I haven’t given this a ton of thought, but my gut says you would have to acknowledge to the reader that this is different.

You can’t let the new characters try to fill the shoes of the old ones; it won’t work. You should make it clear that this is their story now… and that the world has changed to need them as…[Read more]

@sam-kowal Great story! You seriously need to be an author. No joke.

I have to worry though that I’m going to get fat with all the ice cream I eat in these stories. 😛

@bethanysinkyroses heyyyyyyy, welcome back! I was wondering where you went. 😀

@Catwing *laughs crazily* Whoo, this is getting nuts. XD I love it.

@sam-kowal gaahhhh, I love it! *dies laughing*

No seriously, this is adorable. And hilarious. I want more.

@Leumeister

Well then, hopefully he’ll go somewhere with it! 😀

@NotAWriter It’s really really good. 😉

Haha! Well don’t you all be wishy-wash about it. 😉

@Daeus yep, #2.

Okay, I believe I’ve got the final design down. Let me just do a survey on the tagline.

Which of these do you like best?

1. Learn to write better
2. Take your writing to the next level

@kate-flournoy @lifeofkatie @sam-kowal @introvert_girl @supermonkey42 @dekreel @dragon-snapper @catwing @aislinn-mollisong @shannon