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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic First Lines in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
OOH @SleepwalkingMK I know that one! I wasn’t playing ’cause I don’t technically have time but I can’t resist. Till We Have Faces. 😀 Your favorite book.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yup. Sad truth. XD
@Dragon-Snapper I really, really like both of them. They’d be better with the music, but as that’s not quite the point… 😛 I probably like the first one a tiny bit better, just because I’m an INFP and it’s more mysterious than the second, but they’re both good. The others gave great advice; I’ve got…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yup. Sad truth. XD
@Dragon-Snapper I really, really like both of them. They’d be better with the music, but as that’s not quite the point… 😛 I probably like the first one a tiny bit better, just because I’m an INFP and it’s more mysterious than the second, but they’re both good. The others gave great advice; I’ve got…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic So I finally started a website. Feedback and suggestions welcome. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument I like it too. I would say the sidebar seems rather large though. Not sure if you can change that without changing the theme. One thought is that the text in the middle of the picture on the homepage is hard to see. Making it bigger would help.
Btw, wordpress.org has a forum you can go to for any WordPress issues you’re facing.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic So I finally started a website. Feedback and suggestions welcome. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@His-Instrument I like it! The first page looks very nice and professional. However, I was wondering about the solid green background headers for the other pages. For one thing the green is a little glaring, and two it’s not that engaging just to have a blank sheet of color. Could you put pictures there?
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Emma Flournoy's profile was updated 8 years, 11 months ago
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Aratrea I just bet you did. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
*snorts* @Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 8 years, 11 months ago
*snorts* Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @jess Signing out now. I did some editing on a really long chapter and now have to go back and do a lot more.
See you around later.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper That. What did I spell it with Ks? I thought it looked weird, but it didn’t show a spelling mistake. *sigh*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal @dragon-snapper Oh, nice picknick going on here. I think I’ll join in. See you in an hour.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@Aratrea I concure mostly with what the others said (though I’ll admit I skimmed over a lot of the techincal detail stuff. I know next to nothing of web design. :P). Mostly what I thought when I first went there though was the focus on the story right away, instead of you and the blog. Someone else mentioned it too; it just struck me a little odd…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper From what I’ve heard, most Americans say “‘erb” without the ‘h’ sound. Australians say it as it’s spelt, with the ‘h’ sound. Although, there could be exceptions 😛
By the way, sorry I didn’t get back to you for so long. I’ve been sick and am only just feeling well enough to do more than sit on the couch all day…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Very well. I edited about 1,100 words.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m back if you’re there. I think I’ll go for forty-five minutes to an hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.
So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]
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