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@moriahs Ok; cool. I think that you could turn protecting a family heritage into a meaningful plot if you showed why achieving that goal was important to the MC’s personal development. That being said, if your goal with your story is to show the costliness of freedom, I agree that a different central plotline would be better to display that theme.…[Read more]

@moriahS If you want her to be taking part in more than just farming, which can be a lot just in itself, then there are several things I can think of from the top of my head. I know that in WWII, women often went to work in factories and other shops because most of the men went to war. They also knit socks and built things for the entire army.…[Read more]

@moriahs Are you looking for additional plot lines because you’re worried that protecting a fortune isn’t meaningful enough to carry a whole plot, or are you looking for additional plot lines because the story is too lean, and it needs more things happening in it? Not sure which you’re wrestling over.

@That_writer_girl_99 @MoriahS Ha, I see my reputation has spread. XD *rains purple glitter across the room* Don’t worry, it washes out.

Erm, the one with Keira Knightly, I think. Regardless, I really enjoyed it… @moriahS

I’ve only seen the Pride and Prejudice move… @moriahS

In all seriousness- I’ve grown very found of listening to the Piano Guys on YouTube. Have you heard of them? @moriahS

@moriahS *whispers* @ethryndal Has a thing for glitter, fair warning…

@ethryndal I’m even later than you are.
@moriahS *bows* Forgive me.
That aside, I welcome you to Kingdom Pen! Do you play any instruments?

@MoriahS Yeesh, I never thought I would turn into the welcomer who’s always late, but it’s become a trend of late. *ahem* Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen! (To be completely cliche…) It’s a great little place, as I’m sure you’ll soon find. See you around! *disappears in a cloud of glitter*

@Moriahs Greetings! Glad you could join us over here at the Kingdom!

Hi, @moriahs. Glad to find another historical fiction lover. I can’t say I love the research, but if I can handle that, it’s one of my favorite genres.

@moriahs Oh, nice. I read Bond’s Crown and Covenant Trilogy, Betrayal, and a couple others when I was still in high school and remember enjoying each of them. Great historical fiction there.

@moriahs I love the WWII era! 😀 Especially the dresses and the music. 😉

Oh, that sounds like an amazing movie. I’ll have to watch it someday. @Moriahs
I’m afraid my movie horizons are in serious need of some broadening…I really only watch Marvel movies, or Star Wars…

@Moriahs I’ve never heard of that one. What’s it about?

@moriahs Oh. Hey. Welcome to KP! I love photography too! (and Photoshop…). That sounds so cool being able to take photos of African landscapes and animals. I’m sure you’ll enjoy being a part of the KP community heaps.

Hello, @Moriahs ! Welcome to KP.

I love photography as well, but all the pictures I take are off of my phone…

Erm, unique question that no one has asked you yet… *thinks very carefully* What’s your favorite movie?

Hello @Moriahs! Welcome aboard!! Do you know your MBTI personality type?

@MoriahS Hello there, fellow North Carolinian! Welcome to KP! What are your favorite books? 😀