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valtmy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
The best character in ATLA is, naturally, Iroh.
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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
Looking for beta-readers:
@catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @rochellaine @jenwriter17 I’ve been working on a short story (fantasy) about Norse mythology and am almost done. I was wondering if any of you could beta-read it? *hides behind computer* How do you give someone beta-reading access? Do you just post a Google Doc link and give them Comment…[Read more]
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@warrenluther04 Yes; just click the blue box at the top right corner of the google document that says “share” and you’ll get a link you can post on the forums. You can either allow comment access, or just let people view and then comment on the forum. Both ways have been done.
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@rochellaine Thanks!
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@warrenluther04 yeah I’d love to beta read for you!!! its been a long time since I read fantasy 🙂
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@jenwriter17 Thanks! I’ll re-tag you on here when I post the link! 😀
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Umm…and also it may be awhile until my story gets on here…. 😐😑😶 I’m having difficulties with Google Docs and the whole sharing thing…. (I am using a school email account and it isn’t letting me make a shareable link.)
Soooo….yeah. I’ll let you know when I get it up.
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@warrenluther04 okay, no problem. 🙂 (sorry I don’t know anything about google docs to help)
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@jenwriter17 Thanks! Sorry for making you wait…
Also, @skredder, would you mind beta-reading my story when I post it? Thanks!
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Sure, I’d like to beta-read for you. 🙂
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@skredder Thanks! I’ll notify you when I post it…which will hopefully be sometime fairly soon….
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
“As a warning, I have a knack for melting chairs. Or else, why would you have a stool?”
😃😝
Most likely my favorite part. Hands (paws, 🐶) down!
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper @sage-g @dekreel @pretty-much-any-other-artists
I have a new character! It’s an elf from my new short story (WIP) called Ualair Fencaryn. He has mid-back (if that’s a word) long blond hair, green eyes, and sharp, angular eyebrows. He has a hawk-like, thin, angled face. He is thin but muscular. He usually wears a green-brown tunic…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Phew! Thank goodness!
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@skredder Haha! My sibling and I used to play with the chess pieces like that! Give them voices and all that jazz X)
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
You know you’re a writer when you hear about someone else’s experiences and think: “Hey! I can make a character like that!”
All the time. Can’t keep up with it 😛
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Joy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
You know you’re a writer when, as you’re playing solitaire, you’re forming a story idea in your mind about four kingdoms who were scattered apart by enemies, and are forced to cooperate and work together to rebuild them
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 That’s okay! XD
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 Oh, and YES! Totally leave comments! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@gabbyj Sure!
BTW your signature is awesome 😉
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@warrenluther04 All right. Dog it is! 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 I’d imagine somewhere in the tween-early teen age, since that’s how old the MCs are, but I don’t know for sure
@sam-kowal @valtmy Thank you both so much! It helps a lot 😀
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valtmy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
This actually isn’t all that bad. The writing flows nicely and does fit that of a children’s book. Though I agree with @sam-kowal that there is not enough tension that would keep a reader (especially a child) engaged. The story so far seems to be more of a description of the events that are happening as there is not much conflict or…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@sam-kowal Yep! Agreed… like if Eragon uses too much energy he’ll kill himself…
YES!!! She’s funny and sarcastic.
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Okay! (But I’d still prefer to be a dog…I honestly think it fits me better than a dolphin) 🙂🐶
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