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@rae

Felicity 

“Uh huh. Real convincing.”

Chase looked uncomfortable.

“I know about a broken vending machine nearby that you can get free drinks out of,” Felicity continued. “I can show you if you want. Maybe that would cheer you up? Unless you’d rather go to class. Do you like soda?”

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Yeah, that makes sense. I’ve read the Ilyon Chronicles, which kind of has a similar vibe to your story’s time period and world, and one of the side characters (Christian) married a former prostitute after she became a believer. So, maybe it kind of reminded me of that, I don’t know.

@whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon

Lois

“I, well…” Lois adjusted his glasses, avoiding eye contact with the others. “Leaving isn’t really an option for me. Especially when I’m older. My family…” he trailed off, and they walked in silence for a moment.

Then he cleared his throat and continued.

“This school is my escape, I suppose. I’m just…[Read more]

@beth-torres

You’re alive! Yay! KP has not been behaving itself lately.

The memes are wonderful😂

Thanks hehe

@rae Aww those are so cute! And the colors look so smooth. I love them.

@ellette-giselle exactly what I thought too tbh

@the_lost-journal don’t worry, we pay attention to you!

@hybridlore @ellette-giselle honestly I didn’t see her as a love interest for him. It just didn’t make sense to me. So yeah, having a bunch of scenes of them interacting and then saying “they’re not meant to be a thing” would be weird.

@ellette-giselle

Yep lol.

Yeah, that makes sense. I couldn’t remember if it was an area he went through often or not.

Gotcha. Yeah, I get that. I was wondering if she might become a love interest for Julian, but if not, it’s probably better not to involve her too much.

@ellette-giselle

To be honest, I kind of guessed she was going to be a prostitute, so Julian’s reaction seemed a little much (especially to seeing her bare shoulder or whatever lol.) But then I reminded myself that it was different back then, so it made sense.

I would like to see her become a bigger part of the story, unless that doesn’t wor…[Read more]

Yayy success

@raxforge

Mateo would be right on the line of arson and murder, lol

I can add him in. XD it’s somewhat concerning how full those two categories are.

@whalekeeper

You hit the nail on the head. In-story, little Hugo steals rare spices because he wants to learn to make fancy pastries and tea leaves.

Hehe I knew it.

I could also see…[Read more]

not my video btw

have a day gecko y’all

@hybridlore lol

@ellette-giselle well it’s cause Leon’s being whipped and will probably die.

But I mean like we should be used to that by now. Julian helping Rosalind is novel and thus should get attention.

@keilah-h

I’ve tried. I think she enjoys tormenting us 😂

@ellette-giselle wow! What a section. Between Julian’s encounter and Leon’s torture, this was a lot.

Is Leon gonna die or will his life be spared? (even if only for a little while longer)

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in our minds would be a big thing you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry it took me so long to get to this!!!
I like it a lot!!!! <3 keep it up!!!!

@ellette-giselle
Ohhhh, okay. Wow, that is a longgg book. XD

@stephie that first one lol

literally me

I have dozens of stories but only like three are properly finished….