Michael Stanton

@Daeus @Northerner dah! Had to restart my laptop… it froze on me… *glum look* Sorry to keep you waiting. I got 623 words.

@Daeus *screams* I DON’T WANT TO TURN EIGHTEEN!

@Daeus… don’t you mean nine? :’D
I’m with ya.

@hope That looks fantastic! Great work.

@hope Not completely sure what you mean with the mental/physical distinction since, from a thematic perspective, you can weave themes into both sorts of stories in a rather similar way. What parts of these lessons do you think have been more focused on physical conflicts than mental conflicts?

I’m not sure how well story structure works across…[Read more]

@audrey-caylin Got it. In that case, scenes 1 and 3 look like a great way of deepening the protagonist’s EiL and pushing her forward in that. How would you say that scene 2 relates to the themes of truth & forgiveness?

Thanks for posting this Daeus! Y’all should come. This time we’ll be making sure all 3 of us are actually able to participate in the panel. 😉

Thanks so much guys! I haven’t abandoned you; my laptop went AWOL for a space there… XD

@R-J-Wordsmith @Jenali

You glance down at the notebook in your lap only to find it covered in elegant, foreign symbols, and the pencil in your hand glowing with a faint blue light.

@hope That looks great! I really like the expanded depth you have here with both five-step processes. They look good to me. 🙂

@audrey-caylin Haha, nice work choosing ‘normal’ scenes. 😉 Just so I understand what’s going on in this other story, what’s the theme that’s being tackled?

Welcome back. 😉 I appreciate the spoilers. xD My spring break is coming up this next week and A Time to Die is at the top of my reading list for that week. Great work with those scenes. Sounds like a great way that Brandes initially forces the protagonist to choose a specific Experiment in Living, and then continues to test and push her in that…[Read more]

@jenali That sounds like a great example. I love how many mothers are being mentioned in this thread!

@Dragon-Snapper heyyyy… you insulting dragon brains?

@Daeus *nods* You show ’em.

XD

@Daeus you may wanna check on your minions. I’d hate to see the ‘inept’ stereotype fulfilled in real life… :’D

@Dragon-Snapper yay! *high fives you* Don’t worry I trimmed my claws recently. 😉 I think I’m going to stop now too— 691 words, deducting a ten minute break when @Daeus wasn’t here. Did you finish your chapter, Daeus?

@Dragon-Snapper yay! *high fives you* Don’t worry I trimmed my claws recently. 😉 I think I’m going to stop now too— 691 words, deducting a ten minute break with @Daeus wasn’t here. Did you finish your chapter, Daeus?

@Daeus I’m with you.

@Daeus a’right.