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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 16: Theme and Minor Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years ago
@jenali Looks like a good set of minor characters there! I like the fact that you have a foil situation with Teren’s house and the country as a whole. Those kinds of comparisons can make for effective theme development.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Sixteen: Theme & Minor Characters in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@jenali I would generally agree with that as an overall principle. I will mention, though, that with short stories you also have less space, so sometimes I think leaving minor characters undeveloped can make more sense in a short story given how little space you have to work with.
I haven’t read that book, but it sounds like a good example!…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 15: Theme & Major Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years ago
@jenali Got it. Sounds like a good arc for her then. With that piece in place, all of that looks good!
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years ago
Yeah, when you make the plot goals secretly dependent on the thematic goals (which it looks like you’re doing here), the plot doesn’t always align as clearly with the character arc moments as it would otherwise. Sometimes you’ll want to look to a minor theme to keep the rest of the plot relevant, as it looks like you’re doing with…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Discussion for Video Twelve: Foil Characters in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years ago
@anna-brie Elanor and Marianne definitely constitute a good foil in Sense and Sensibility. Keep looking for examples and I’m sure you’ll be able to come up with more!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@PerfectFifths *nods* an INFP is a good thing to be. I’m one myself. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl me too? Please?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus there won’t be a test. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus the basic difference between J and P is that Judgers make life happen, while more often than not Perceivers let life happen and respond accordingly.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus though I have noticed that when INFJs go into fanatic mode like that they get a little hardened. 😛
@Dragon-Snapper I rebel. 😀 Anna may be jumpy but to me that’s part of the reason I liked her. Just sayin’.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl ha! I need one of those lists… *starts to scribble it down**realizes they’re all villains* Um… never mind. XD
@Daeus yes! Who would have thought it? *grins*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus I can think of several backstories that could have happened to him and I do NOT want to hear about them… XD
It is amazing though. Just goes to show how crucial it is to understand the functions themselves and not the stereotypes.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus OH— my goodness. Yes. You’re right. *stares at screen**nervous smile**huddles deeper into blankets and cuddles stuffed leopard* Yeah. He is.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl he seems pretty serious. XD I hadn’t seen it until about a month ago. I’m not a big Disney person, quite honestly. Just never got into it. And Frozen definitely has it’s problems… like Elsa. For a main character, she had some major characterization issues, and… actually no. I’m not going to go that way. WHOEVER WANTS TO WATCH IT,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper *opens mouth wide**takes deep breath* ‘LET IT GO!’
*dissolves into a fit of laughter* I’ll say one thing for that song— it’s certainly fun to sing. All those high notes and long holds… *shivers of delight*
And come on. Really. It wasn’t as bad as people make out. I enjoyed it. I mean, for what it WAS— it’s not like high…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper *opens mouth wide**takes deep breath* ‘LET IT GO!’
*dissolves into a fit of laughter* I’ll say one thing for that song— it’s certainly fun to sing. All those high notes and long holds… *shivers of delight*
And come on. Really. It wasn’t as bad as people make out. I enjoyed it. I mean, for what it WAS— it’s not like high…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus it wasn’t THAT bad… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Yeah, what’s up with that? Either we’re prancing through a field of flowers, or wreaking havoc throughout the universe!
@graciegirl YES. It’s crazy. :’D Literally the only INFP heroes/heroines I’ve been able to find are Frodo Baggins, Arwen Undomiel, Anne of Green Gables, and one or two others I can’t remember. Whereas the villains… I can…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl ha! 😀 I haven’t read it either. INFP villains do seem to be remarkably prevalent though. It’s scary actually, but since I’ve started looking I’ve found more INFP villains than I have heroes. ;P
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl oooh, actually you know what? You’re right. Good example.
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