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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Welcome to the site, @moriahs! Glad you found us. Who are your favorite authors?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
Welcome to the site, @morahs! Glad you found us. What do you like to write?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!
… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years ago
@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 welcome to the club. *cackles*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*
fyi… I really did write that down…
HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I’ll critique this as soon as I have enough time to give it a thorough read. It looks interesting. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 *scandalized gasp* FIRST RULE OF SURVIVAL AROUND HERE— ALWAYS—! (No…) NEVER! MOCK! KING! DAEUS!
XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 shhhh!! Don’t spill the beans! XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus *grins and writes it down* Okay. Now what?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 yes… you INTJ people are the reason we INFP people have to worry about it so much… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 been there, done that. *grins*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Graciegirl but it’s a paradox! Something so beautiful from something so hideous! It’s a picture of salvation!
(Don’t you dare say anything about frogs. I’m working on a theory that will have them symbolize the evil influences of the world). -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *high five* You are now furnished with complete protection against the numerous dangers of this forum. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *ahem**pokes you* @Daeus is teasing you… being the newbie and all… don’t take him seriously unless he specifically says to… you’re welcome. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 *cough**cough* One does like to be somewhat… discreet. 😉 Can’t scare away all our test subjects on the first day, can we?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl Separately! In your own homes! With minimal social interaction! LOL! XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@GracieGirl… *wise look* My dear fellow INFP… technicalities are not the point.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@Daeus hear hear. Pity one can’t be both… but if I have to choose it’s poet hands down. All human beings function on emotions. How many normal people are going to want to follow the convoluted explanations of an intellectual?
@GracieGirl yup. I may be way too slightly in love with my personality type. -_o
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