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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Probably the same place I got my “scraggly coarse tarantula beard.” 😛
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Probably the same place I got my “scraggly coarse tarantula beard.” =P
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Not sure what I’m supposed to think about this… 😛
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@lady_erin Ahhh–got ya. Good luck with that then! Starting a new book is one of my favorite parts of writing. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic *waves hand wildly * Sup Keepers!! in the forum Start HERE 9 years ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thanks for the tag!
@Lady_Erin Yeah, sorry, I’m one of the few weird people here whose username doesn’t match their profile name. =P If you go to someone’s profile by clicking their name, you’ll be able to see what their username is. It takes a bit, but you’ll get used to who has different username/profile name combinations…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
*shakes head* You guys… XD
@That_Writer_Girl_99 YAY!!! *tackles you and smothers you in blankets and pillows* We knew you could do it! Way to go! *fuscia confetti*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Dragon-Snapper lol! XD
@That_Writer_Girl_99 nope. Not yet. I want to get him good and proper in my head before I try it. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years ago
@Anne-Of-Lothlorien too late. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 yep. And thoughts are actually the least necessary of those three. Oftentimes I just cut them out and let the actions tell the story. Emotions and actions go a long way to cluing people in on what someone’s thinking. 😉 😛
Yeah… maybe it means easy as eating pie? XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 *hugs you*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Thanks @DelightInLife. 😀 It took me forever to get that actually… :/
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
I didn’t write that, and I don’t think I can right now. I’m not that good.
*wise Yoda look* That— is why you fail.
*goes off into gales of smothered laughter* Okay, okay… so it’s not that drastic. I have a reputation to live up to apparently, though, so… *shrugs*
No, you’ve got enough humility to sink a ship.…[Read more]
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