Michael Stanton

@His-Instrument I like it! The first page looks very nice and professional. However, I was wondering about the solid green background headers for the other pages. For one thing the green is a little glaring, and two it’s not that engaging just to have a blank sheet of color. Could you put pictures there?

*snorts* @Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛

*snorts* Dragon-Snapper no! Of course not. I just want to make sure I study them both properly before I say anything. 😛

@Emma-Flournoy Thanks for the feedback! Appreciate the input. Yeah, I had fun writing that bio. 😉

@graciegirl Sweet. 😀 Looking forward to seeing it!

@sleepwalkingmk Awesome. Yes, those look like good motivations, especially the protection aspect. A false sense of selflessness can go a long way to creating a compelling villain.

@lifeofkatie Got ya–thanks for the clarification! Yeah, not sure how much I can do about screen sizes, but I’ll see if I can resolve that. 🙂

@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD

@DaughteroftheKing *excessively evil chuckling*

This topic.

I likey.

Well, it sounds like you have a good thing going already— he seems a very detailed, duplicitous character just on the surface without people knowing he’s got an evil layer, and that’s brilliant. If the character seems complete as he is (with his own little contradictions…[Read more]

@lifeofkatie Thanks for the feedback! Are you referring to the social media buttons or the link to the ‘Contact’ page? On my screen, the ‘Contact’ page is on the same line as the other pages, but that may not be the case on a smaller screen. What kind of device are you using?

@jane-maree

Wow. OK, you and your sister are seriously the best. Because I wouldn’t have known about half of that stuff if you hadn’t commented. xD If she ever wants to help KP web design, just have her shoot us an email, haha.

-The text is actually black to the best of my knowledge, but it’s a thin font and an overly-gray background. I made the…[Read more]

@Dragon-Snapper what they all said.

I will just add that it’s definitely not an uncommon problem to have. There were times in the past two years as I waded through two drafts of my WIP that I just felt like going and drowning any capability of conscious thought in a deluge of mindless articles— anything to save myself from having to open my…[Read more]

@daeus That’s what I had been thinking would look better, but I wanted to verify that. I’ll brush up on my CSS and see if there’s an easy way to make that work.

I know very little about screenwriting. @michael-stanton would be the person to ask about that if he has the time to respond.

I’ve found it sometimes helps to get some distance. A while back I was having a rough time with my current WIP, so I set it aside for a month and tried to forget about it. Once I came back to it, the fresh perspective…[Read more]

@Kate-Flournoy Ah; yes. That awkward moment when you forget your own website’s mission statement. xD Thanks for the feedback! I’ll see if I can make those page options any bigger.

@daeus That’s helpful. Were you picturing just a box outline around the smaller text, or for it to actually a box insert that would block out the cathedral picture…[Read more]

@Aratrea I really like it!

First thing I noticed— in your bio you said, when you were describing KP, ‘through proficiency and purpose.’ I thought it was ‘with proficiency and purpose.’

If it’s possible, it might also be better to have your page options in a little bit bigger font. It took me a second and a few confused glances to find them.…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉