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@acancello

“A masquerade party?” Amir said, completely bewildered. “Why?”

“Maybe they’re torturing us,” Hugo joked, “what could be worse than dressing up and dancing with girls?” He laughed, seeming to have made a full recovery.

Girl I legit started laughing!!!

“That’s strange,” Amir commented from the floor, “these clothes, this rack here.…

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@whalekeeper

They’re going great, and I’ve been getting so much great feedback on my story? How about you?

@trailblazer

Oh, that works!

(gotta go… for now…)

@trailblazer

*Crumples post like a scribbled note* Okkayyy…. so change of plans… 🙃 as much as I want to make something happen, I am having a bit of a hard time, lol… so I’m going to wait it out a bit… 😓 *sighs*

@trailblazer

Lol… I’ll bring Blair or Isabella over to chat with one of the Thurmans if you want…

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @freedomwriter76 @grcr @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @I hopeIgoteveyone

Hugo

Ottolines story was horrible, making Hugos seem simple in comparison. She had been through so much, for so long.

“You didn’t deserve that. No one would.” He said, a bit choked up.

Ottoline looked at the floor. He lost control and g…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Lol. 😅 (I don’t think anyone is engaged in conversation currently, so pretty much everyone needs someone to talk to)

@esther-c

lol 😂 (I don’t think I would have made it past the spider.)

@thearcaneaxiom

Do you think that the Paynes of the labor camp would use names still, but perhaps only in hushed tones especially around Pythonos?

Yeah I think so.

 An issue that I’m beginning to see now however is that it still feels like there’s no continuity of characters. Who do the readers connect to? Once they get to know one set of char…

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@acancello @mineralizedwritings

Yeah I’m good with whatever 🙂

@traiblazer

KP ate my original post where I had put all the ages of the McKinleys and so I had to hurry and redo it. So I must have forgotten to put Esther’s age, but she’s seven like @grcr said.

@trailblazer

They’re both still young though, so any romance between them would have to stay pretty light and not get too serious until they’re a little older. Bennett also is going to the army when he turns 17 or 18, but depending how their relationship would play out, they could write letters to each other and such.

I know you also said Tin…

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@trailblazer

Great! 😄

(Unless its been changed, Esther is seven)

@grcr @whalekeeper @freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer

Okay guys, sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

He’s 45, with blue eyes and blonde hair. He’s very kind and loves to talk with people. He’s one of those parent’s who’ll stay hours at church talking with other parents! He’s good looking and muscular.

Ada McKinley

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@savannahgrace2009

Alrighty! 😄

A love triangle would be interesting…

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Okay guys…sorry I’m late, but meet the McKinleys!

Reuben McKinley

45 years old, 6’3. He’s easygoing and friendly, very easy to talk to. He’s one of those parents that will stay at church for hours chatting it up. He has blue eyes and blonde hair, good looking and muscular.

Ada McK…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Its good! You’re not too late! I don’t think there’s anything too important to know… it’s still pretty early in….

You may know already, but there is a party at the Baumann’s house and everyone is invited.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley @trailblazer @grcr @everyone

Sorry guys, I’m super late! Anything important that I missed that I should know before I make my “family”?

@trailblazer

lol 🙂

@trailblazer

(@freedomwriter suggested it, btw 🙃)

That would be interesting…