mcmuffin

Eh, we’re down to 11.

Heyyy we broke the record!!

Well, we broke the record for the first time in 6 years.

When you put it that way…that makes it sound so much cooler XD

Well… ehh… hanako is off….

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

@rae

Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]

AAAHHHHH!!!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆

WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!WE DID IT!!!

We did it!!!!!

Were there! I guess we need 13….

Beth-torres got off…

I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@esther-c

I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉

I will check it out!! I need all the help I can get…. XD

@freedomwriter76

Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)

Does it seem boring?

NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?

Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?

A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]

hey yeah… maybe we should tag some people….

Hanako will get on in a few seconds (or minutes)…

@mineralizedwritings

Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂

At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…

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Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, we eat really early.😅

Were already so close!

@jonas

Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…