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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @anyone-else
Next chapter!!!
What am I doing?
Frustration built up in Lilitu’s chest until he wanted to scream.
But he couldn’t scream….or else Adar would find him.
Cass isn’t going to come bail you out this time, he pressed his lips together in a thin line. You have to figure it out yourself.
He tried to find a comfort…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I will!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay great!!! hahaha!
Really??? That makes me really happy!!!! Thank you!!!! <3
Speaking of Eloy, I just wrote a funny Eloy scene (it’s kind of cheesy I think, but I’m going to edit it later.) I’ll post it in a little bit!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle @jonas (let me know if I’m tagging you too much, I know you’re probably busy!!!!) this goes for anyone else too, please let me know if you’d like me to stop tagging you lol @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @anyone-else
Here’s a second half of the Lilitu chapter:
(Again, this is unedited so this won’t be the finished product, this is…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
First of all, I don’t know if you had planned for Lilitu to have any more lasting injuries than some cuts and bruises, but from the level of beating he’s just received, he’s likely to have some cracked or broken ribs (which could damage internal organs), and/or a concussion. And if he was knocked out/unconscious for long…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago

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Did you know that frogs can jump 12 times higher than a
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I’ve never seen it but it looks so cool and that song is beautiful! I’ll have to look into it some more. 🤍
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh poor Calvin! I vote A, Q, and X…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
The beginning has changed SO. MUCH.
The storyline/plot is pretty similar, but it’s definitely different…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you!! 😃😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, and thanks @elishavet-pidyon !! 😊😄
And I love your picture too, it’s really pretty!! 💛
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
YAYYYYY
I love it when you give me critiques because you literally always help me, whether telling me things I need to change or what I’m doing well, no matter what it is it always builds me up in the end, I appreciate you so much girl <3
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Ah!! I love that lol