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@freed_and_redeemed

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THOSE SCENES YOU SHARED!! Gahh! Especially the second one! Now I like Riker even more!! XD XD

@ellette-giselle

*looks up what aesthetic means*

eh… not really. I could be using the word wrong, idk, cuz I guess I just meant it more in a… mmm… vibe sense? Ehhhhhhhhh…… just exclude that note. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)

haha lol!
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Maybe those helped? 🤔

If worse comes to worst, feel totally free to leave the tank just plain white… 😄😄

part II

@ellette-giselle

And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:

@ellette-giselle

That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀

lol same 😄

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha

lol I’ll have to use real pics….

The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:

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Ugh, so I can’t post two pics in one post, eh?

Give me a minute and I’ll repost… in two separate messages… 😒

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄

Name: Fir Sayre

Age: Fifteen

Gender: Female

Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

GIRRLLLL I’m so excited for you!!!!! That’s awesome! 😄😄😄😄😄😄

How is everyone else’s writing going? <3

Terrible lol. I’m mostly kidding. I haven’t made too much progress on my novel recently… but my brother and I have been writing random prompted short stories, and those are… well, those are also terrible haha &…[Read more]

@rae

Ok… here is mine!

@ellette-giselle

Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?

Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! 💛💛

@ellette-giselle

Omc where do you find all these quotes? I love them!

@ellette-giselle

Oops I forgot to mention that I deleted the scene with her not wanting to talk to the Great One…so now it’s just the scene with her and Lilitu pretending to be animals.

I really liked it so I put it into the “scene recycling bin” if I need it again, but for now it’s not in the draft.

@everyone

Sixth Chapter!!!

Chapter 6

A Voice

Lir stretched out as far as the eye could see-the crown jewel of Andromeda, the pride of the Pythonos.

Sef stood on the hilltop, overlooking the city, taking in the sights and smells as if she were starving, though she knew she’d never be able to partake in the beauty of it all.

Paynes w…[Read more]

@esther-c

I honestly don’t know XD

Here’s the link you can use (but there’s not a lot of “new chapters”…and the first couple “new” chapters need a lot of redoing, but you can read ahead if you want! Just keep in mind that if you critique them, I’ve seen a lot of the problems already. The new chapters I’m talking about are…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Aww tysm girl that means a lot!!!

And so true!!!!!!

@ellette-giselle

😀 XD

ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD

Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

Ah, ok! 😀