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Chapter 7

Rage

Pain.

A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.

On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.

Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.

Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]

@jonas

you want an em dash instead of a hyphen

Noted. Thank you!!!

Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?

She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Let me think….yEs PlEaSe HeLp Me 😭😭😭

If you’re busy though, that’s fine no worries!

@rae

Sef

“You’re like my mom.”

She caught Chase staring, and giggled.

“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”

She stroked the bird with her finger again.

@calyhuge

Sounds great XD I’m kinda excited!!!

@rae

Omc I’m so sorry…give me a second…I forgot AND I’ve been on a break for four days :/

@whalekeeper

aww their cute!

I have a character, too—whenever a spot opens up. 🙂

@ellette-giselle

Aahhhhhhh!!!! I love it!!! Thank you so much!!!! 😍😍😍

For all y’all who’ve sent me characters, this isn’t just a one shot only thing. If any of you have another character that you want me to draw just go ahead and send the description! My pencil fingers are itching for some more lovely characters!!

Alright! I may give anoth…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THOSE SCENES YOU SHARED!! Gahh! Especially the second one! Now I like Riker even more!! XD XD

@ellette-giselle

*looks up what aesthetic means*

eh… not really. I could be using the word wrong, idk, cuz I guess I just meant it more in a… mmm… vibe sense? Ehhhhhhhhh…… just exclude that note. 😅

@ellette-giselle

Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)

haha lol!
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Maybe those helped? 🤔

If worse comes to worst, feel totally free to leave the tank just plain white… 😄😄

part II

@ellette-giselle

And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:

@ellette-giselle

That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀

lol same 😄

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha

lol I’ll have to use real pics….

The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:

part II of this message…[Read more]

Ugh, so I can’t post two pics in one post, eh?

Give me a minute and I’ll repost… in two separate messages… 😒

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄

Name: Fir Sayre

Age: Fifteen

Gender: Female

Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

GIRRLLLL I’m so excited for you!!!!! That’s awesome! 😄😄😄😄😄😄

How is everyone else’s writing going? <3

Terrible lol. I’m mostly kidding. I haven’t made too much progress on my novel recently… but my brother and I have been writing random prompted short stories, and those are… well, those are also terrible haha &…[Read more]

@rae

Ok… here is mine!

@ellette-giselle

Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?

Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! 💛💛