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@ellette-giselle

Sooo, I’ll have to see what you think, but I’ve been told by my beta readers that the first half of the book is about the situation Aaron is in, and the second half is about HIM personally. The first half sets the stage, the second half goes deep into the character. so, You’ll have to tell me what you think.

Personally, I don’t…[Read more]

I shall attempt to give advice in the best way possible. lol.

but it’s definitely out of my comfort zone!!!

Oh and about the names…

i’m soooo bad at names.

I literally just googled:

last names that mean water, plants, pain, etc.

So yeah. I know I’m a terrible worldbuilder and that should be a crime…but it works lol

@linus-smallprint

Main Ship is like the main “couple” or romance. Even if neither of them fall in love…if people are “shipping” two of your characters together that means that they are rooting for your characters to fall in love.

So even if neither of them actually are a “thing”, the main ship could be the two characters that your readers seem…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

No, Eloy and Cassian are full brothers (idk if I said that right lol). They have the same mother and father– mother is Indie and father is Azazel. Lilitu was adopted, because his parents were Jraldath and Selena (AKA Kaden and Sevryn from the Prologue). The reason Lilitu isn’t part Pythonos is that he was born before his…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Thanks, that makes me feel a little better 🙃😁😅😄

I’m 21. The other guy is 20

Ohhh that explains why your writing’s so good!!!! It all makes sense now!!! lol

I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I h…[Read more]

Okay, after reading this through again, I don’t think I’m the best person to give you critiques on this book.

You see, I’m really experienced in fantasy and sci fi (and half the time I don’t even know what I’m doing XD)

And a book like yours isn’t something that I’d probably pick up on my own.

In no way is this because of the book itself…it’s…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

He was frustrated as anyone would be in the circumstances…… Turin is the one with the wicked temper around here. You can be someone who is naturally very easy going, but who does lose their temper in a certain situation, or at least gets frustrated

Ohhh okay 👍

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron’s  flaws whether or not…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay…I’m so sorry…I’m not the best at critiqueing 😣😭😭😭😭Actually I’m horrible at it but oh well

OK, in the begining I said that Aaron was 18!! Turin was a year or two older Sabina was 16! Does that fix it???

Well…you should be able to tell a character’s age based on how they act, without the author saying that. Since both…[Read more]

Here’s Sef’s playlist

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Guys…

I just made a playlist for Lilitu…

Apparently Lilitu loves rock songs…

WHAT HAVE I DONE?!?!

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Niceeee!

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!

Wowwww you’re so good at drawing 😍 I love your worldbuilding too!!!

@lightoverdarkness6

Oof yess, I’ve done that before too 😅 But girlie if you ever feel the need to step away for a few weeks or however long you need, don’t be afraid to do that! We’re always here for you but we understand that we all have lives outside of KP and sometimes taking a small break can be super beneficial 🫶 And if not, that’s great t…

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@keilah-h

Thank youuuu! That makes me feel a lot better about my worldbuilding because I feel like I suck at it XD

Let me just info dump about the trees (don’t read this if you don’t want to, it’s a lot)

So in my story the trees are intelligent, thinking beings, and are often used as Messengers of the Great One (God). So since Azazel killed the…[Read more]

@rae

omc I am sooo sorry! I just haven’t been in an RPing mood and keep forgetting about this or procrastinating XD

Not that I don’t love RP’ing… I love it with everything in me! It’s just sometimes I’m not in the mood or in the mood for other things more. Does that make sense? Not that that’s an excuse…sorry I feel bad 😕

@calyhuge

yep we…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Wow!!! That makes me so happy you read through that whole thing! because even i probably wouldn’t have that long of an attention span XD XD

I forgot to mention Erstonians.

Erstonia is a country that’s across the ocean from Andromeda.

The people who live there are diverse in appearances. There’s no rule for skin, hair, eyes, etc. Some…[Read more]

@lightoverdarkness6

Hiiii Light! I’ve missed you! Long time no see!! 😄😄

Ooo two camps! That sounds like fun! I bet that is exhausting.

I’ve been ok. Alive and, well, just living lol. Slowly progressing on everything. My sister and I may be auditioning for our first play next week though! We’re really excited for that, even though we’re just…[Read more]