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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks @nataliemarie it has just been published on KP if you want to see it in its proper shape. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose I’ve got some editing to do, so I can join you. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus hm, yeah. That’s a puzzler. I would probably not do that, for the sake of my conscience and because I wouldn’t want to get accustomed to having bad words on my lips, even if they aren’t mine.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus true. I guess I meant more that to acknowledge their existence by saying ‘he cursed’ is not the same as actually putting all the lurid details down on the page.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus that’s a good idea about the content advisory.
I don’t quite agree with comparing curse words to romance or violence or any other more ‘normal’ sin, as their crime is not their existence, but spelling out their filthiness on the page. With ‘romance’ and violence, you can put as many or few details in as you like. With a curse word, it’s…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess I’m leaving now. I think you won’t be far behind. I have almost finished two edits on The Golden Conch. Super pleased.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess I’m still going. 🙂 To the rest of you adios! 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey, why isn’t the tag working? @emma-flournoy
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BlueJay replied to the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@nataliemarie @emma is a tag, but you want @emma-flournoy.
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BlueJay replied to the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@nataliemarie @emma is a tag, but you want @emma flournoy.
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BlueJay replied to the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@nataliemarie @emma is a tag, but you want @emma-flournoy.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper @winter-rose @jess I’m still going too.
@daeus Well done. I don’t know how many words I got since I’ve been editing. And still going. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper @winter-rose @jess I’m still going too.
@daeus Well done. It’s all for writing Daeus, even if it’s not writing. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
*cough* Sorry sis. Didn’t stop to think about whether you wanted to answer that or not. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Hey Guys, Hi, um…. in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@Leumeister that’s pretty cool… I haven’t done any animation though. Just artwork; digital painting. Also some book cover design. 😉 Comes in handy when one is a writer, don’t you think? 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper good point, but may I point out that they’re not talking about swearing. They’re talking about similes. Likening something to heaven or to hell, not saying ‘by heaven’ or ‘by hell’.
In which case, by the way, I would also tend to agree with @Winter-Rose.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daeus Great. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I have come to the conclusion that I need trained sea creatures including a Barracuda, swordfish, sea horse, a mermaid and a merman.
Wow! I have destroying an hair style I had in my hair as I am editing. You’ve picked up on some (lots) of great points. And they’re making me think. Last night I was editing, and I suddenly stood up and acted…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Great.
@perfectfifths I’m editing now. I don’t know quite when I’m going to stop. Feel free to join us. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Great.
@perfectfifths I’m editing now. I don’t know quite when I’m going to stop. So feel free to going us. - Load More

Ha! That’s great, Tessa. Editing will never be boring, huh?
Absolutely. @daeus Do you want it back when I’ve finished or are you sick of it?
No, I’m not sick of it, but I’m fairly busy for a while, so I don’t think I could fit in a second run.
@daeus No worries. 🙂