Masyn

Hey @belegteleri, this is a great poem! I loved it, which is saying a lot since I don’t usually go for free verse. The only thing I would say is watch out for the lines that are much, much longer than other lines, as that can tend to break up the flow.

By the way, I thought Beleg was a bowman, not a shipwright. *wink* 😉

Hey @beleg-teleri, this is a great poem! I loved it, which is saying a lot since I don’t usually go for free verse. The only thing I would say is watch out for the lines that are much, much longer than other lines, as that can tend to break up the flow.

By the way, I thought Beleg was a bowman, not a shipwright. *wink* 😉

An MC who grows up all his life thinking he’s the son of a king, then discovers he’s the son of a pauper.
Actually I’m planning to do that already. 🙂

A scheming fairy god-mother.

Thank you, @Daeus. That pretty much answers all the doubts I had about this scene.
You should hire yourself out as a professional editor.

But honestly, I don’t know how anyone could stand such a profession. 😛

One question— what about the guy? Did the scene pique your interest in him? That’s pretty much the only purpose to have it— to show…[Read more]

A dragon with arthritis.
A griffon prone to colds.

Haha, those are great @kate-flournoy!

Cool. I’m bookmarking this stuff.

A dark lord who takes snuff.

A dragon with arthritis.
A griffon prone to colds.

Grrr….I’m trying to do this via phone cause our Internet on our computers is down. Not easy.
So it should be “how to make quotes”

Can someone tell me how the makes quotes look like quotes. Mine just look like I’ve rewritten them.

A book where nobody dies.
Now that would be freaky.
Why? None of my characters ever die.

The villain lives in a treehouse, a hero who is ugly

Haha, those are awesome @anna-brie!

YES. ABSOLUTELY ONE HUNDRED PERCENT CORRECT @ROLENA-HATFIELD

Princess Academy sounds fascinating. And the surroundings symbol is a really good idea. And…

It’s not so easy for our brave, courageous hero to walk around with their great-grandmother’s lace croquet pillow and still look fearless.

That so totally made me laugh.

Okay, I think this topic merits reintroducing. 🙂

New thought on this. Sometimes, symbols can be used to actually tell the story.
Let me explain. I’ll use an example because I have no idea if this kind of… thing… has a technical term.

Say we have a fantasy world where each and every single person has a candle— lit and burning from the…[Read more]

A prince who is selfish (and decides to leave the princess in the tower
Love it @gretald

A prince who is selfish (and decides to leave the princess in the tower :P)
A villain who wants to be good but doesn’t know how
A hero who wants to join the villain

…I don’t know; that’s all I’ve got. 🙂

A villain who despises black and so wears lime green all the time.

xD I love that @rolena-hatfield 🙂