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Greta replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
“Ow!”
A pirates passing me had punched me right in the gut. Aye, I knowed ‘e was playin’, but it still hurt me feelings. And punches hurt! He didn’t even notice that I started a-crying–until he looked back o’er at me. Aye, I hed a bit o’ a reputation for being a “softy.” But, I ter tell yer the truth, I weren’t no softy.
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Greta replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
@Daeus, Haha, great story!
@writefury and @kate-flournoy, I was laughing so hard when I read that the pet frog died and was then resurrected. XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Ow, you made me laugh so hard @Daeus!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 8 months ago
Great poem @belegteleri. And my mum would love you. She’s always trying to teach us the difference between to and too; your and you’re; its and it’s and so on. (I’m at least getting better. :))
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
That’s so fun, @Rolena-Hatfield! And @Writefury, if I was going to kill him, it’s only fair you make him come back. 😛
I’ll wait awhile and see if anyone else wants to do that prompt, Rolena, then do it myself if it doesn’t get a reply after a bit. 🙂 -
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Hannah A. Krynicki are now friends 10 years, 8 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
GAMES! *delighted shriek* We loves GAMES, Precious!
‘I stumbled down the front steps of the porch and staggered across the lawn, the soft, warm sunshine playing in rippling speckles over my face. No. This was not supposed to happen. I couldn’t bear it— my heart would break. How could he just be gone— just like that? I hadn’t even had a chance…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Hahaha! That would be lovely. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Heh… right. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Boiled Potatoes from Blue Sky in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Hey… I like that!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Oh hey @writefury, didn’t see ya there! 😛
Thanks for the critique— yes, I should hope I’ve improved. I wrote that one… uh… let’s see… two years ago? Or no, I think it was one. Whew… I’ve come a ways since then! 😀 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
*terrified squeal* Um… 2045?
Or maybe… never. 😛 I honestly don’t know if it even has the potential to be published at all. Historical fiction has to be stunningly outstanding to even do tolerably well in today’s market. -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Everybody dies.
Okay. That was a joke.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Poetry Critique PLEASE! in the forum Poetry 10 years, 8 months ago
Yes, the Teleri are fascinating, and poor Beleg is a wonderful character. *sigh* The best characters usually have the worst ends. :'(
So yeah, watch out for the long lines, and that’s pretty much it for this poem. You did good with the emotion— that’s always something I highly prize in a poem, and when it’s very raw and gripping I like it…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Hey, glad you found it interesting @bluejay! 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Silly phone and auto correct. Try again.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
*horrified gasp* Oh no! That’s terrible!
Well actually, I don’t think you have to worry about it too much. It is a given, after all, that most humans have noses. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Introduction Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 8 months ago
Ha… yes, his nose. 🙂 For some reason I tend to give my characters noses that fit their personality types. It’s… kind of weird, when you think about it. 😛
*pauses with mouse over ‘submit’, cringes, moves back to message and inserts*: @Daeus.
*sigh* These tag things will be the death of me yet.😉
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