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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
So let’s get some guys onto this topic. *Stares hard at them* I’m stuck. 🙁 And I’m dying to find out how my story ends. HELP!!
@aratrea
@dbhgodreigns
@lightningmouse
@levipierpont
@markmcguire
@daniel-leinad-thompson-2-2-2
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Whoa! I LOVE that idea. @spradlin. I love sing Staccato. It is really fun and uses a lot of tummy muscles. Do you sing? I do. I’m in the soprano range which is very special. (I just have to remember to practise.)
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Hey, who says you can’t be willing to die for frozen raspberries @Daeus!?!? Why else do you think they say ‘to die for’?
😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Sticky Notes.
Notes of Harmony
Whole Notes
Notes from a Composer
(So those above involve music. I’ll see if I can think of some different ones later) 😀 -
BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 6 months ago
“I am only one;
but still I am one.I cannot do everything,
but still I can do something.I will not refuse to do something
I can do.”-Helen Keller
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
No. Re-phrase it should be nearly 8pm not 7pm.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@daeus It’s tomorrow. 😀 No, it really is. Even though the time has flown by, it is definitely tomorrow. Plus we have just end day light savings. (Or started. I’m not sure which one.) So when I post this it should be nearly 7pm over there.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Hm, yes @spradlin… though that might more denote (get it? Denote? *sigh* Okay, that was really bad) a… community for sharing noteworthy thoughts than a blog of just one person’s noteworthy thoughts.
I don’t know… thoughts?
Yes. I did just use ‘thoughts’ way too many times in one paragraph.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Ah— gotcha @Daeus. Thanks so much.
Yes, I know what you mean… it’s funny, but I’ve tried over and over and over to poeticize (like my made up word? 😛 ) about an object, but for some reason I can only do it about really deep thoughts. Concepts, if you will. Like with this one, I wanted to take the word ‘love’, which is so commonly misused…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
WAIT WHAT NO @SPRADLIN REALLY??? I can’t imagine why… 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Eh… that might be a bit of a reach. 😉
Let’s see. *waits for bolts of inspiration from the blue*
*still waits for bolts of inspiration from the blue*
*continues to wait for bolts of inspiration from the blue*
*concludes that there is no such thing as a bolt from the blue, and as for inspiration, it is a fallacious fairytale our teachers…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
We were posting at the same time @spradlin! 😀
Thanks for the pointers— I can see how that would be a problem, definitely. Would it work, do you think, to cut each line in half, where most of them have a slant rhyme with the middle of the prior line?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Couple questions, Daeus… ‘toil’ is a one syllable word. ???
Also, I’m not quite sure what you meant about replacing ‘cruel’ with ‘and’… I can’t seem to grasp what specific changes you were getting at.
And… oh yeah. Oops. He did lose his shield, didn’t he? *gulp* Man, that’s embarrassing. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh, and @overcomer… 😛 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@spradlin, @hislittlerose, @jadamae… you guys are all poets. What do you think?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Okay @Daeus, @hope, @anyone-else-who-liked this, I’ve been working over it, and I think I’ve got it finished. I want to publish it with KP, but I want to know what you guys think of it first. Without further ado, here it is in it’s entirety.
And just because, here’s the link to the music I was listening to when I wrote the last verse. I think it…[Read more]
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BlueJay started the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Alright, this is aim mainly at men, due to the fact that the letter is by a guy, but if anyone has some helpful feedback I would appreciate it. Let me explain:
You teased a girl at school and got her into trouble all the time. On a wet day you run after her, and slip on the pavement. You crash into and she falls onto the road and is hit by a car.…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Coming from you, I’m sure it’s great.
Thanks @faithdk. That’s really sweet of you. Hopefully it will work out so you can read it. It is 6,686 words at the moment, which is my longest story yet.
Wow, that’s an interesting fact about Ohio and Indiana.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Thanks @hope. Yep. That will work really well. I appreciate it.
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Awesome quote, Tessa! Helen Keller was an absolutely amazing person. 🙂
Thanks Greta. Yes, I absolutely agree with you. She was extremely amazing. I sometimes wonder if I would have been able to copy with it all.
That is so powerful!
Thank Ingrid. It’s great encouragement to me.